We make Romeo and Juliet look like a one night stand.

A Story by Jac Rogge

She wasn’t always nice or a good friend or even a friend. But she had her moments. But not to sound like a bullshit cliché but this story isn’t about her. It was about her brother. Oh isn’t that always what happens, a girl has a crush on her friends brother. He wasn’t that handsome but he wasn’t that bad. We always picked on each other. I hid his s**t and he smeared my face with whip cream. Hes 9 years older than me though, so anything I even considered would be a hell f*****g no. But I couldn’t help it. I always thought of myself has a w***e even though I was a virgin. I guess I thought of myself as a w***e because I always had several crushes. But I guess instead of being a w***e, there was just more than one muscle, hot guy around me. I was spending the night at another friends house. Their houses werent a mile a way from each other. So I decided to walk over over my as I call her a frenemie, its better than calling her a b***h. I thought she might be there but she was with her mom at the daycare were her mom works. So I elected to let myself in. His car was in the driveway. I though id call my mom to pick me up after she finished working or hell just ask him to drop me off. So I went in a knocked on his bedroom door. His facial expression said "What the f**k are you doing here?". But somehow it seemed in the nicest way. He said "What cha doing here?". So I told him I was hoping his sister was here. "Shes not. Shes with mom at work.", "Okay, i'm gonna watch tv in her room and probably take a nap". I was that comfortable in their house! I watched some old episodes of Jerry Springer, you gotta love white trash morons! I smelled he made some coffee, so I went and got some. And so did he. We poured our coffee and then he got the coffee creamer out. My coffee must have coffee creamer. And he used the last drop! He said "sorry" in a d********g way. He went to grab something out of the fridge, so I charged him. I went after his leg closest to me. I tried to pull his leg out from under him but I couldn't. Im 5'2, hes like 6'5, so me even trying was f*****g moronic. He just stood there like "Really? Your shitting me right?". So I went for his n****e to give him a purple nurple, every mans weakness. He hunched over in reaction so I put him in a headlock. If you haven't realized yet, i'm pretty violent. I had him in a headlock for about 30 seconds.Yes, his head is on my 36 D cup b**b. He reached down to my ankle and slid his had up my leg to pick me up. Im quiet light and hes got nice muscles, so I was a feather. So he pulled me up and put my left leg against his right side. I don't think he meant to, but I dont think he mind either. He grabbed my other leg so I wouldnt fall and put my right leg against his left side. So with my body shifting, my headlock changed to my hands around behind his neck. It was awkward at first but then our smiles turned to a sudden stare. Not of awkwardness or even love, more of care and happiness. His hands were on my thighs but then they gently glided to my back. And all of a sudden, without even realizing it I ran my fingers through his hair up from his neck. Our foreheads touched and we kissed. Besides in tv, first kisses are little pecks only using lips, this wasnt one of those times. It was beautiful, hadnt kissed much prior before than. Im talking years but practicing with your pillow apparently helps. I wrapped my hands around his neck and intwined my legs behind his back. We slammed against the pantry door behind my back. We then heard a car and s**t, the best moment in my life, the happiest f*****g moment ended. He put me down, kissed me again, and said "I love you." I wanted to say it back, but I wasnt able to speak. I heard the key in the door. As we let each other go, I felt as if to die, as if to never be that happy again. He turned to his room and I turned just in time to see my "sort of friend" come around the corner. Looking as her brother did before saying "what the hell are you doing?" but it was more cruel out of her eyes. "What ya doing here, Jac?" "Mom was on her way to a friends house and I felt sick so she dropped me off here." She gave a bitchy facial expression. She asked how long I intended to stay, hinting she didnt want me there. So I told her I was gonna walk home. They said they would give me a ride, but I lied and said my mom will see me on the road and pick me up. The walk is only 3 miles, so its not that long, but it felt as if an eternity of depression. As each car went by, I felt as if leaping in front of it. Darkness surrounded me and water dripped all over. Yet the sun was shining and not a drop of rain was seen.

© 2014 Jac Rogge

Author's Note

I personally dont think its that good. But it just flowed through me. Be honest but not to cruel please.

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lee_jang

Hmm, there are many words that are quite too... harsh for a literary piece of work. Not sure but this is your style of writing, so that's quite fine. In terms of the start of the story, right, that one is not related so maybe you can come up with something different. The story is about one-night stand, is it not? I hope you kind of try to be more descriptive and detailed in the scene where they were making out. Also, the story will look better if you separate it with paragraphs so it will be easier to read. :-)