Mysterious Nights

The night's mysterious shadows shroud my thoughts..
As darkness all pervades my very soul
What memories are varnished by the moon
Will I once again be fully whole?

O' thou whose spirit alights my soul,
Bestow your precious love to my aide.
Scaling heights of the shadows in the night,
At Eden's door, I will not be afraid.

I feel the strength of the night inside me
As the moon glistens on the water's side
I await your presence beside me
Whence I will then be satisfied....

'Mid sylvan glades and rose strewn paths.
As twilight falls with silver glow,
My thoughts imprisoned by desire's chains,
On wings of rapture we shall flow.

 

Reviews

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Very heartfelt and emotional write. Very descriptive and loved it!

[charlotte talley]

This poem you two wrote was just beautiful and meaning. I loved the picture with it. IT really goes with the poem. I agree with THE ROCK AND ROLL CO. it is full of intense mystery and enlightenment. Keep up the good writtings guys. Great work.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Full of such intense mystery and enlightenment... a really though provoking piece that has many interpretations. Awesome work.

[Catrinka]

This is awesome! What a fabulous writing team you two make!!! and love the pic too, perfect! This one might be your best collaberation yet! It's going into my favorites folders - Great job!

[Nicholas Hallows]

Awesome piece!
Echoes of the metaphysical poets to me.
Great appreciation of language and imagery.
Well done!

[Angel's Lady]

My thoughts imprisoned by desire's chains,

How dang beautiful is that line! Wow. You guys are awesome!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

What a wonderful piece. This is beautifully written and I love the picture.

[Amor-de-angel]

Wonderful collaboration. So pleased you two are still writing together. You have gelled so good. And you make it look so easy.

Top marks my talented friends...x

[Valentine]

This is well written and the two of you must feel similiar or feel life alike..I just wondered if one wrote a line and then the other or wa it 4 4 4 God bless..Valentine

[Wildfleour]

A lovely write and it's even more special as a collaboration! Bravo you two!