Walking on the mountian tops with you
Our spirits soar as the eagles on high
Holding your hand as the wind blows strong
I feel the world surround me and I sigh
Walking on the sea shore with you
Making love with the passion of the waves
Kissing your sensual lips so tenderly
As our love swells to a crescendo of joy
Walking in the valley with you
Fearing nothing as long as we are together
Our footsteps echo to each other
As one with the love that we share
Walking across heaven with you
Dancing as the celestial chorus plays
A symphony of eloquence
As forever we sing in sweetest harmony
I agree with Beautifully Tragic- You two do work beautifully together.
Walking on the sea shore with you
Making love with the passion of the waves
Kissing your sensual lips so tenderly
As our love swells to a crescendo of joy
Wow! Thats not all I felt about this but its all I feel safe with saying. WOW!!!
" WE WALK IN LOVE AS ONE " Now that line says it all, when you are truly in love
I enjoyed this write very much
Thanks too both of you
Ray { Not a Poet }
Great!! Simply great!!
Once again so many beautiful images in my mind...ooooh!!
"Walking on the mountain tops with you
Our spirites soar as the eagle on high
Holding your hand as the wind blows strong
I feel the world surround me and I sigh"
Beautiful lines...and definitely my favourite!!!
Wow now that is collaboration,,you guys are soul mates no doubt,,,keep going, keep loving, and may the love you share reflect onto others, so they may find something so beautiful to share... =)
The last stanza said it all for me, even after death, you walk as one, beautifully expressed, you compliment each others writing and that is a good collaboration.
Antony
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