Life, So Pure

We have made lives so complicated, albeit it is so simple. Let us keep it simple!

LIFE, SO PURE

 

Were we made to be so complex?

Life has become so perplex

World, in a mire

Wonder, how to make it square.

 

Simplicity, a rare virtue

Complexity, the only pursue

Life, so simple

World, akin to crystal.

 

World so fast, keep pace or be classified ‘negative’

All so aware, albeit so insensitive

Pause and think, is it worth?

Progressiveness, should be human worth.

 

Birds merrily up in the sky

The JOY one cannot buy

Human born pure, progressively altered

Keep it simple, HAPPINESS assured.

 

Am no preacher, just desire told

Life is pure, Human behold

Give LIFE another chance

Keep it simple, LIFE is a rare CHOICE.

Author's Note

This is my 2nd poem. Have penned down my thoughts .

Reviews

[Carola]

in my opinion, life is only complex as you make it.
if you are confident & clear in your pursuits & have all the required information, then other people's viewpoints are just that... another opinion to take on board as added info or to ignore.

in your 3rd line, i would write — 'World's in a mire' or 'World is in a mire'. if you read it aloud you'll probably find it flows better.

cheerio carola

[Jacob Eapen Sam]

Thank you for the feedback. Yes, point taken. You are spot on.