WILL U?

WILL U?

A Poem by JACOBALLPHINMWA

If I stay will you go?

If i stay will you fight?

If I stay will you care?

Probably not.

Then Y do I stay?

© 2011 JACOBALLPHINMWA


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short and to the point



Posted 13 Years Ago


This is good, but the words substituted with letters take away from the overall mood and make it feel like a pop song. Otherwise, nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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