A Bear Called Harry Went To Learn Ice-skate

How does the bear went to learn ice-skate?

Once upon a time,there was a bear called Harry.He was called Harry,because he had so much fur.His house was built next to a river,so he can catch fish without walking so far.One cold morning in winter,the river was frozen of the cold weather.He saw two mouse were ice-skating on the frozen river.They were ice-skating very happily.Harry thought that if the mice can learn ice-skating already,why I don't learn it now?So he got his ice-skating shoes and went out.He were them and walked to the river.When he stepped on the river,he slipped down!!!The mice laughed and said"How stupid this bear is!!!"But Harry didn't mind what the mice said.And he continue learning how to ice-skate.He slide and slide down again.And the mice laughed and laughed again.They laugh so much that their eye balls were nearlly falling out!!!!But because of Harry's fur are so thick,Harry didn't bled.At last,Harry learned how to ice-skate and ice-skate happily!!!And the mice was so suprised,that their mouth were nearlly touching on the ground!!!!This story tells you that even you saw something that is very hard and you can't solve it,just try your best!!!And you can do it!!!!!!!

Reviews

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Oh this is so charming, I really enjoyed this write.
Amazing detail and imagery as well.
Nicely done!