Don't always play computer game!!!

Really don't play computer game!!!!!

Once upon a time,there was a boy called Andy.When he was seven years old,he was so smart that he knew everything in the world!!!!!!!!One day he saw many people play cool computer.He wondered"Why is everyone like playing computer games?"Then he asked for his friend a computer game website.When it was end for school,he quickly got home and play that website.He played twenty-four hour and said"It is so much fun!"And he played for a week.His mum knew it,so she said to Andy,"Don't play computer game anymore!!"But Andy said"That doesn't matter."And he became stupider and stupider.And when he was eighteen,he was so stupid that he couldn't find a job!!!!And that time he was very regret.And he worked so hard,but he got less money.And when he was thirty,he died.

Reviews

[Anna Lam]

Jackson, what a sad story! I feel sorry for Andy.

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it is a meaningful story
i think we all should see that and not to play too much, and take the benifets of the internet and the computer
well done :)

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

A meaningful poem...