Jacky in a planet who called "The Monster"

Jacky in a planet who called "The Monster"

A Story by Jackson Lai

Once apon a time,there was a rich boy called Jacky.When he grow up he wanted to be a astronaut.He had the astronaut's clothes,many guns and a space ship that also has guns,planes and cars all of them had guns and bombs.He wanted to go to a planet called "The Monster".It is the dangerous planet in the universe.There had monsters,ghosts,dragons..........He brought seven peoples with him.They are Jack,Jeffrey,James,Noddy,Eden,Andrew and Barnabas.They are the bravest men in the world.They went to Jacky's space ship and they went to the planet.They use the planes to distroy the things in the planet.Then they started their mission.It is to kill everything.They kill the white ghosts.They kill all the huge dragons and monsters.What a bloody planet!!!They went back to their home.And that planet didn't called "The Monster",but "The Red Planet"

© 2012 Jackson Lai


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Added on March 15, 2011
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Jackson Lai
Jackson Lai

Hong Kong, China



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