Hungry Tom

Hungry Tom

A Story by Jackson Lai
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My first writing!!!!!

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                                    The Hungry Tom

  One day, sleepy and hungry Tom was doing his homework in his huge green bedroom and his beautiful, tall mum was cooking dinner. When he finished his homework he yawned. He was so hungry,so he went out from huge green bedroom and went to the huge dangerous kitchen.

   When he went out his mum was talking on telephone to someone. Tom was curious what was in the round blue pot which his mum was using to cook with. He climbed up on to a wooden chair, because he was too short. Then his mum saw him, she was very angry .

She said “Don’t climb on the brown, wooden chair, it is very dangerous!”so he climbed down from the wooden brown chair and said “sorry.”

© 2012 Jackson Lai


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WHY MUM DO NOT SAY GO TO DIE

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stupid story

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stupib crazy

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Wow! great writing !

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Added on February 17, 2011
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Jackson Lai
Jackson Lai

Hong Kong, China



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