Can't Fail

Can’t fail

 

I’ve traveled this highway of zig zag emotions

Cried every tear drop my heart it could spare

Lost out in love with the best of intentions

Stood on a corner so keenly aware

 

Looked in the mirror and saw my reflection

Counted the marks in the pain I did find

Pushed it aside leaving little detection

Smiled at this life at the front of my mind

 

Put on my pants in a fit of conviction

Pulled on these boots as I head for the door

Shoved every fear in a forceful eviction

Facing the world that does greet me once more

 

Confident eyes stare in every direction

Finding each dream will become ever true

Picking a clover to fill my collection

Grabbing that rainbow now long overdue

 

All that I am is man of precision

Strong as can be to the end of the rail

Love me or leave me, becomes your decision

I will be me for I know I can’t fail

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Lily Finch]

woww so inspiring , so motivating and these lines ''All that I am is man of precision
Strong as can be to the end of
the rail
Love me or leave me, becomes
your decision
I will be me for I know I can’t fail'' loveee it

[MsJewel]

Your talent never ceases to amaze me Jack. I love everything about this uplifting piece, but most of all the feeling it left me with after reading it.

Confident eyes stare in every direction
Finding each dream will become ever true
Picking a clover to fill my collection
Grabbing that rainbow now long overdue
Brilliant!
:) Julie

[RichGee]

Wow. This reads so smoothly...very enjoyable...
And even motivating...I CANT FAIL....
Beautiful Jack.

[Mark]

Very nice. Like a song almost.

[Jack...]

Thanks Mark

[Linda alexander]

Confident eyes stare in every direction
Finding each dream will become ever true
Picking a clover to fill my collection
Grabbing that rainbow now long overdue
Great write, bunch of days, what is the point of failure, fully agree with the message

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care

[zephyr]

This piece really gives you some get up and go. Seize the day, right?

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sarah.

[Baby Ricochet]

A man who puts his pants on with conviction will never fail so tomorrow when I put my pants on Goddamn it I'm gonna mean it.

[Jack...]

One leg at a time my friend. Thanks so much.

[Cassie]

Now I see what you have become, A strong man and I love you....thank you for this. keep going on strong. This is good as usual

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sweet Sunshine. Nice to have your smile on my page.

[LadyAnn68]

LOVE IT...will save to favorites...you sound like you have made the journey and succeeded wherever you left off...as I have done recently! this is an excellent write!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. I appreciate you.

[LadyAnn68]

And I YOU!

[Rita L. Sev]

Love me or leave me, becomes your decision
I will be me for I know I can’t fail

This is an excellent and wise philosophy. All we can be is who we are, and it is up to the others if they accept or do not. A great piece that stands strong, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Rita. I am happy you enjoyed this.