Sharing

Sharing

 

We shall find a pathway

Following the breeze

Leading us to paradise

Here beneath the trees

 

Across this wooden bridge

Taking in the view

Life can be so beautiful

When sharing it with you

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

What a beautiful setting and a touching end. Another perfect piece! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sweet Madalyn. You are so very kind to me...I appreciate you.

[Lydia Shutter]

You transported me to a bridge in a serene setting. Anything is possible when you are with the one you love. Such a romantic poem. Great rhyming and imagery. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I appreciate your kindness.

[...]

the simple things in life are the most profound and beautiful, just like this lovely piece :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Lynn for your visit today. You have brought a great smile to my face.

[Sami Khalil]

Sharing is most important in relationships. The joys, the hurts. The ups and downs. The poverty and richness. It makes life so beautiful and worth taking those paths in oneness...A wonderful short write Jack...:)..............

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami. I appreciate your kindness.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................