Sharing

Sharing

 

We shall find a pathway

Following the breeze

Leading us to paradise

Here beneath the trees

 

Across this wooden bridge

Taking in the view

Life can be so beautiful

When sharing it with you

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Short and sweet with touches of sharing in the moment.
Love it.

[Jack...]

Thank you Josie. I appreciate you

[BlackRose]

Cute wonderful piece penned here. It sure can be.

We lay head to shoulder neath the trees so lush and green. Nothing surrounds us but the serene. Our hearts mingle with the rustling. As an entity so vibrantly bustling. Our cares left behind. Me with you, our hands securely twined.

@{/:o)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[s y e]

Life can be beautiful... especially when you have someone special to share it with. Another lovely poem Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate your kindness.

[Corset]

Sharing a life with the right person can be like that, I look forward to days like these, when the world feels harmonized, thats how you know you are on the right tract, it's easy to be with that person all the time, even when you are fighting, you cant imagine doing it with any other angry face, lol.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. Sharing is a big part of the entire process. I appreciate you stopping by.

[Marie]

Yes life can be beautiful. Sharing it with someone you love is good, but it's not the only thing...

[Jack...]

Never said it was Marie. Thanks so much.

[Douglas Levi Gribbins]

Beautiful, unlike anything i've read today.
Kudos to you, my friend.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. I appreciate your kind words and your visit today.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very comfortable, and comforting write.

jacob

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[DIVYA]

This is utterly beautiful. I have not come across a lovelier poem on love and sharing. You created heaven with your words! Kudos Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for those kind words Divya. I always enjoy your visits.

[DIVYA]

Reading such soul stirring poetry is a great pleasure Jack!

[Zahra]

Loved this poem so much, really very cute and wonderful. Awesome

[Zahra]

Loved this poem so much, really very cute and wonderful. Awesome

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend. Hope it made you smile.