Sharing

Sharing

 

We shall find a pathway

Following the breeze

Leading us to paradise

Here beneath the trees

 

Across this wooden bridge

Taking in the view

Life can be so beautiful

When sharing it with you

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Cassie]

This is just about what I needed...quite inspiring, encouraging..I am glad you shared this.

[Anita Singh]

So serene and beautiful!!

[Jack...]

Thank you Annabella

[Baby Ricochet]

Really nice Jack. ...................

[Jack...]

Thanks BR...

[Rita L. Sev]

Brief, beautiful... bravo!

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend.

[Lyn Anderson]

A sweet breeze of a poem.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Short sweet and simple and beautiful. blessings

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your kind comment here and on our collaboration.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your kind comment here and on our collaboration.

[therisa]

Sigh. I don't know, which is more beautiful, the graphic that accompanies the poem, or the poem, itself. For both, transport me, to another world, still unspoiled by human interest. I can hear the insects and other animals communicating with each other, even though, I live in a concrete jungle, caught in the grip of a bitter winter. Thank you, for giving me, this refuge of summer, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you for leaving such kind words for me. I appreciate you.

[therisa]

Your welcome, Jack.

[Tina Louise UK]

What a beautiful picture you paint, wonderful Jack :) x

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Tia. I appreciate your kindness

[Cryingkate]

PUURFECT !

I'm not afraid to cross this bridge!

[Jack...]

Let's go then... :) Thanks so much Connie.

[Cryingkate]

I do it everyday thru your poem and song journey Jack !
Thank you for giving us all your heart,mind and soul.

[Linda alexander]

Taking in the view
Great write, true to the every bit of this poem, fully succeeded in expressing the message of sharing and it's effect on life, lucky to those who have some one to share when they are on the bridge in aspect to share the beauty and in the other aspect to have some one to walk up to that bridge, enjoyed

[Jack...]

You are correct. Thanks so much Linda.

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care