Ticket to Heaven

Inspired by a conversation with Cryingkate (Connie)

 

 

 

Ticket to Heaven

 

 

We drink from the fountain of earthly delights

Sweet to the taste, ever cool to the touch 

Blushing of purity bred in our hearts

Glistened enchantment now needed so much

 

Beneath a rainbow’s curved ribbon effect

Painted in singular motions of love

Rippled reflections bare moonlit disguises

Memories fashioned below and above

 

A ticket to heaven on silver cloud linings

With only the touch of your rose petal lips

Swallowing all that affection does offer

Consuming desire in delicate sips

 

Breathless endeavors of water fall shimmers

Deeper we dwell inside every dream

You in my arms on this aqua blue evening

Illumined in passion, aglow in the gleam

 

Softy your eyes shine eternal devotion

Enchanting your beauty now all I can see  

There is no need for this ticket to heaven

For heaven is anywhere you are with me

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[BlackRose]

Losing breath in all of this. Beautifully splendid. As I have said before, you have such a gift, a way that speaks to people in wonderful ways. :o)

[Jack...]

My friend, you are always so kind to me. Thank you so very much.

[BlackRose]

My pleasure. :o) Ever so welcome.

[MsJewel]

Breathless endeavors of water fall shimmers
Deeper we dwell inside every dream
You in my arms on this aqua blue evening
Illumined in passion, aglow in the gleam

Such beautiful poetry Jack. I know I've said this before, but you do have a beautiful heart my friend. It shines in every gorgeous word.

:) Julie

[Jack...]

Thank you my sweet friend. I always look forward to your visits and appreciate the kindness you share with me.

[Lyn Anderson]

Another romantic verse. Who'd a thunk it? LOL. Seriously, lovely as always

[Jack...]

I knew you'd like it KL. :) Thanks so much my friend.

[s y e]

I hope she likes it Jack. This is lovely.

[Jack...]

I think she did. Thanks my friend.

[Lover Of Words]

well geee gawlly my man you kicked this one to the sky so many beautiful layers to this one you are surly good at leaving me speechless

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Kelsey.

[Cryingkate]

Holy sanctified Heaven. By George I think you nailed this one !
I'm not sure if you even know the layers in this.
There are very deep Scientific and Spiritual truths here,
mixed with that Spiritual Love.
Nailed !

[Jack...]

So I take it you liked it? Thanks so much my friend. Sorry it took so long, it has been a busy day for me.

[Lover Of Words]

A review like that thats her way of saying you left her speechless :)

[Cryingkate]

Well Heck Jack.. You gonna make me say it?
I loved it and I love You for being the Heart to write it !
Wow.... so many great ones of yours I love It feels funny to say how much I love each one. I'm afraid you won't believe me.:-)

[Cryingkate]

Kelsey :-)

[Jack...]

I will never tire of hearing kind words my friend.

[Lover Of Words]

:)..... cant help it Connie :P

[Cryingkate]

Kool cause if you really get tired of hearing "Love It" then you'll have to stop writing.
read more Kool cause if you really get tired of hearing "Love It" then you'll have to stop writing.

Ps perfect image with it too.