Writer's Paradise 2 - For Cryingkate

Inspired by Cryingkate's poem Writer's Paradise and the conversation that ensued in the comment section.

 

Writer’s Paradise 2 �" for Cryingkate

 

Like an answer it calls,

loud voices of the inspired,

sipping coffee cups

Picking moments like fresh corn,

hoping for the sweetest

Falling into space

in tiny squares of who we are

Lost in words

Requested visits due in time

as the door opens

the mat is clean…WELCOME

 

Breathing in search of dreams

Still dark outside as

bright light finds me

and I am home

Where I belong…mostly

Some love me, some don’t

some don’t care one way or the other,

but they are my family,

sharing thoughts and ideas,

well wishes flourish

and sometimes anger

 

Human beings, trapped in a world…

not trapped, (that was wrong) found living.

touching others and soothing hearts

Examining feelings with magnified senses

Skipping from here to there,

dressed up for an evening in

Finding direction and offering it

Poetry, it is our blood,

the rivers we float on hand in hand

till we reach the falls

and go headfirst into our own writer’s paradise

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

I agree that CryingKate gives everyone a little bit of her heart and that makes us all admire her more each day for the simple things she does by the simple write of a word she can change someones life for the better... A great tribute to our loving cryingKate

[Cryingkate]

This wasn't actually a tribute but thanks for the kind words. Jack had left some supportive comments on my Writers Paradise that I thought he should make his own writers paradise poem. I thought it was awesome and so he did and this is the beautiful results -)

[Lover Of Words]

Well it seemed like one lol

[Cryingkate]

LOl All those lovely comments didn't go to waste :-) I ate em up and stored them away :-)
Thanks >>

[Cryingkate]

Doesn't this photo look so real you can feel the wetness and smell the algae on the rocks?

[Lover Of Words]

Yes it sure does

[Jack...]

Thank you so much. She is a gem, that's for sure.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is really wonderful, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you Brittany

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a great tribute to that poem and the emotions inspired by it. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[BlackRose]

Poetry is within us all. It's all in how we express it through writes and such. I'm sure your friend loves this wonderful piece.

@{/:o)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Blackrose. I appreciate your comments and kindness today.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

"Poetry, it is our blood,

the rivers we float on hand in hand

till we reach the falls

and go headfirst into our own writer’s paradise"---favorite part!

I love the picture, too.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Josie, I always enjoy when you visit.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

U R WELCOME!

[s y e]

I love my little Connie, she is too cute for her own shoes. She is just the best and this is a lovely write. I know she will love it. Well done.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my very good friend. I always appreciate your kindness Sye. Yes she is a fun one, that's for sure. I hope she likes it as well.

[Cryingkate]

Oodles of Noodles lost her poodle but found it in the kooldle:-)

[A. Amos]

Jack this is elegant and soul like Connie deserve such a chillout part 2, as Connie is great friend I truly pay my humble gratitude for such an amazing creation. Loved the line, " Poetry, is in our blood" epic my friend.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. She asked me for my thoughts on a writer's paradise...this is what I found inside.

[A. Amos]

Your a genius Jack a true master of his game and your most welcome