Mesmeric Rapture

Inspired by Frieda's Hypnotic Trance

 

Mesmeric Rapture

 

Take this, my needful heart, Sorceress

Break my sweat from swollen pores

Shake that bead’d desperate desire

Simmered sighs of sweltered stew

Tie me down in ribbon’d faire

Infernos blaze deeply below

Cast your spell, incantation’d bliss

Stick inky pins, pointed seduction

Rag doll dances interpreted

Hypnotize me with roguery

Mesmerizing fragrance kisses

Enchanted eternal hocus pocus

Command me spirit’d

Tease me with feathery phantasm

Paint'd black magic aphrodisiac

Stirring with elixir’d lips

Fashion’d to a perfect fit

Tattooed illusion’d obedience

Witch-Crafted to be your man

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Ooh, creepy and very sexy at the same time! Thanks for RR'ing this one to me Jack! This is very much my style. I love the lines "Tie me down in ribbon'd faire/Infernos blaze deeply below/Cast your spell, incantation'd bliss."

It has elements of sadomasochism, witchcraft, and romance all blended together. I also love the lines: "Command me spirit'd/Tease me with feathery phantasm/Paint'd black magic aphrodisiac." They evoke so many fantastic images of magic, darkness, and horror in a sexy combination.

I've also noticed you using the "'d" at the end of words, in the way that Frieda does a lot - is she rubbing off on you a little? (May have just been a coincidence, but it stood out to me.)

[Jack...]

Thanks Eric. This was a companion piece to Frieda's poem "Hypnotic Trance" so yes, the use of her style in this was intentional.

[Eric Pudalov]

Oh, then that makes this especially brilliant! Excellent work.

[Zahra]

Strong wording and wonderfully crafted. Very nice

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

[Goat]

This poem is great! It is well written and well structured. I love magic. Nice write!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Rose. I appreciate your kindness

[Cassie]

Thank you Frieda for inspiring such a lovely flowing poetry and Jack, you pen needs lots of lavish gifts, you need to pay a tribute to it and adorn it with expensive gifts.

[Jack...]

If I could afford it I would my friend. Thanks so very much for always being so kind to me.

[MsJewel]

Hypnotize me with roguery
Mesmerizing fragrance kisses
Enchanted eternal hocus pocus
Wow...Jack..love this softly sensual piece. Stunning, stunning poetry.

:) Julie

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Julie. Happy to see you visit.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You have mesmerized me my sweet Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[BlackRose]

WOW, another fantabulous piece, 'poof' here it is. Got me spellbound, under your spell, taken me there. ;o)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Blackrose. I am thrilled you found this one.

[BlackRose]

I do one way or another, you know me. :o) My pleasure, your welcome.

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[Tina Louise UK]

Beautifully spellbinding....loved it! :) x

[Jack...]

Thank you Tia. I appreciate you stopping by.

[AYVID N]

Such an intoxicating read! The voodoo and enchantment worked very well in conveying her magic.


"Stirring with elixir’d lips

Fashion’d to a perfect fit

Tattooed illusion’d obedience

Witch-Crafted to be your man"


Spellbinding write!.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very Divya. I always enjoy your visits and the sweet words you leave for me.

[m.s.early]

Frieda's presence is definitely noticeable. No doubt. You two compliment each other well. For a second I thought I'd clicked on read request sent by her. I had to do a second take. ;)

[Jack...]

She was the inspiration...thanks so much my friend.