Let's make beautiful music together

Inspired by Xavier's E-string and Frieda's Fiddling G-strings

 

 

 

Let’s make beautiful music together

 

 

Caress my neck softly

Hold my body close to yours

Tempt these sweet chord progressions

Acoustic affection’d freestyle

Finger my frets with delicate touches

Mother of pearl inlays sweat

Bending vibrating strings

Crank my volume knob high

Sliding capos moan

Play lead in poetic rifts

Soundhole oozes sensual melodies

Gouging pickguard’s scars

Tune me in the key of your love

Strum me hard…

 

Let’s make beautiful music together

Author's Note

Thanks for reading

Reviews

[prachi prangya agasti]

Let’s make beautiful music together... nicely played with words... a wonderful write... :)

[Blue]

"Strum me hard" made me chuckle. I personally like gentle strumming, though. :) I agree with Eric's review below. The sexy references are commendable. ;)

[Rita L. Sev]

Lyrical wordplay for the song of love, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend. I always appreciate your kind words.

[Cassie]

Tune me in the key of your love Strum me hard… Let’s make beautiful music together.....this is my best line. As usual you have a way with words.

[Jack...]

Happy this melody touched you Sunshine. Thanks so very much.

[Latifa]

Tempt these sweet chord progressions
Acoustic affection’d freestyle
my favorite lines , wonderfully written

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Latifa

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Beautifully written, such a sexy poem I love the concept, the oozing ruined the imagery for me a little though if i'm honest.

[Jack...]

No problem, thanks so much for stopping by and leaving me such kind words. I wasn't too sure about oozing either, but it is what it is...thanks again.

[Eric Pudalov]

DUDE! This is really sexy work, Jack! I love all the double entendres and musical/sexual references. Lines like "Finger my frets with delicate touches," and "Bending vibrating strings" imply so many sensual ideas without being overly explicit or trite.

This is obviously very passionate work, and on top of that, I love the picture too. Since you said that this was partially inspired by Xavier's "E-String" and Frieda's "Fiddling G-Strings," I'll have to check out those poems next.

Believe it or not, all of you have helped inspire my romantic/erotic poetry as well, and I suppose that's part of why we're all here.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Eric. At least it is why I am here. I learn something new each day from all of the talented writers on this site. I am thrilled you like this poem, it was fun to write.

[Eric Pudalov]

Awesome! It sure sounds like it was.

[Brittany Zedalis]

And you amaze me yet again. This piece is so full of passion and it flows so well. Great job!

[Jack...]

Thank you Brittany. Your kindness always makes me smile.

[Baby Ricochet]

Strum me hard ey? I play guitar a little. Every time I crank up my amp my cat starts crying and my girlfriend turns up the TV. That cannot be a good sign.

[Jack...]

Trust me BR, I know exactly what you mean. Thanks so much.

[Shirlena]

Ooooooo WEEEEE! This is sizzling and brazen yet sweet and classy. How did you manage THAT Jack...putting this together without it becoming sleazy...I know how, because you got skills.

[Jack...]

I'm a gutar player, that's how. Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. I tried to make it just enough suggested to get away with it.

[Shirlena]

It's PERFECTLY SMOKIN