Let's make beautiful music together

Let's make beautiful music together

A Poem by Jack...
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Inspired by Xavier's E-string and Frieda's Fiddling G-strings

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Let’s make beautiful music together

 

 

Caress my neck softly

Hold my body close to yours

Tempt these sweet chord progressions

Acoustic affection’d freestyle

Finger my frets with delicate touches

Mother of pearl inlays sweat

Bending vibrating strings

Crank my volume knob high

Sliding capos moan

Play lead in poetic rifts

Soundhole oozes sensual melodies

Gouging pickguard’s scars

Tune me in the key of your love

Strum me hard…

 

Let’s make beautiful music together

© 2014 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thanks for reading

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Let’s make beautiful music together... nicely played with words... a wonderful write... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


"Strum me hard" made me chuckle. I personally like gentle strumming, though. :) I agree with Eric's review below. The sexy references are commendable. ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyrical wordplay for the song of love, Jack.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much my sweet friend. I always appreciate your kind words.
Tune me in the key of your love Strum me hard… Let’s make beautiful music together.....this is my best line. As usual you have a way with words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Happy this melody touched you Sunshine. Thanks so very much.
Tempt these sweet chord progressions
Acoustic affection’d freestyle
my favorite lines , wonderfully written

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Latifa
Beautifully written, such a sexy poem I love the concept, the oozing ruined the imagery for me a little though if i'm honest.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

No problem, thanks so much for stopping by and leaving me such kind words. I wasn't too sure about o.. read more
DUDE! This is really sexy work, Jack! I love all the double entendres and musical/sexual references. Lines like "Finger my frets with delicate touches," and "Bending vibrating strings" imply so many sensual ideas without being overly explicit or trite.

This is obviously very passionate work, and on top of that, I love the picture too. Since you said that this was partially inspired by Xavier's "E-String" and Frieda's "Fiddling G-Strings," I'll have to check out those poems next.

Believe it or not, all of you have helped inspire my romantic/erotic poetry as well, and I suppose that's part of why we're all here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Eric. At least it is why I am here. I learn something new each day from all of the ta.. read more
Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

Awesome! It sure sounds like it was.
And you amaze me yet again. This piece is so full of passion and it flows so well. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Brittany. Your kindness always makes me smile.
Strum me hard ey? I play guitar a little. Every time I crank up my amp my cat starts crying and my girlfriend turns up the TV. That cannot be a good sign.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Trust me BR, I know exactly what you mean. Thanks so much.
Ooooooo WEEEEE! This is sizzling and brazen yet sweet and classy. How did you manage THAT Jack...putting this together without it becoming sleazy...I know how, because you got skills.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

I'm a gutar player, that's how. Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this .. read more
Shirlena

10 Years Ago

It's PERFECTLY SMOKIN

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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