Dawning of love

The dawning of love

 

You whispered your secrets

on breezes of starlight

of moonbeam collections

in night sky desire

 

Those twinkling phrases

beyond the horizon

which once held the sunset

in blistery fire

 

Beneath every pine tree

found evergreen wishes

with snow dressing branches

long winters to show

 

And springtime petunias

bloom fresh for the season

soft feathery visions

you want me to know

 

That here as we’re lying

this hillside of splendor

while counting the diamonds

a’ shine up above

 

Each sunrise of morning

a new day's beginning

right here in my arms is

the dawning of love

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[prachi prangya agasti]

words were perfectly used to create a delicate and soothing atmosphere of love.... liked it... :)

[star73]

very nice felt with what the words say and picture!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Another romantic, masterfully penned poem. Your poetry exceeds the boundaries of the imagination, and the boundaries of love.

[Blood Ink Diary]

What a serene and majestic poem ! Keep penning...

[MsJewel]

Breathtaking and beautiful - the perfect romantic poem!

100/100 springtime petunias
:) Julie

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Julie. I appreciate your kindness.

[Mark]

A very nice use of nature to shape a look at new love. Well done. There is one typo... you left off an apostrophe to show possession in 'days beginning'

[Jack...]

Thanks Mark, glad you caught it before KL.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful. lovely lines.

Blessings



Each sunrise of morning




a new days beginning




right here in my arms is




the dawning of love

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this poem.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're are very welcome. it's my pleasure always. I just had to read this poem again such a delight and it is in my General reading. Blessings. kinder poet

[Aethereal]

Ah, the acknowledgement of Nature! If a tree falls in the forest unnoticed, has it really fallen. We’re Nature’s Strategy of Self Adoration.

[Jack...]

I think you are correct. Thanks so much for stopping by.

[Baby Ricochet]

For some reason it reminded me of that old hippy song "Sunshine of Your Love." I like that song so it's a good comparison.

[Jack...]

It's getting near dark...I like that song too my friend...Cream was one of my favs. But "old" hippie song? :) Thanks so much BR.

[Tina Louise UK]

Simply stunning, you write so beautifully...loved this one :) x

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Tia for your kindness