Harmonic Echoes

 

 

 

 

Harmonic echoes

 

 

In echoed voice I shall shout the truth

beyond waning sunsets with colorful smiles

and fields of snow covered poppies in blooming dance,

waving at me in the breeze like they know me…maybe they do

 

Standing here above all else,

feeling taller than I should (but small in the grand scheme of things)

builds a certain strength in my heart…

energizes this tired, worn out man with new life

 

Breathing the altitude’s winter’d air,

a rush of splendor entices a gleam in my eye

For whatever beauty I may see, there is always you

and I truly want to look nowhere else

 

I have climbed this peak, fought the terrain, the cold,

clawed and scraped on this wondrous day,

so that the world below, humming their own tunes,

meandering like ants, performing their duties oblivious to all

 

Would hear what I am about to say…

As it is in this moment of stillness,

this peaceful serenity that I conquer my fears, eyes wide open

pulse racing in fevered flow as…anticipation swells

 

Taking a deeper breath burns my lungs, but in a good way

as I move two steps closer to the edge, gather my balance

and shout from this apex of the world…

“I love you”…in hopes these harmonic echoes find your ears

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Latifa]

well this harmonic poetry have certainly echoes in my ears for it is very beautifully written and mind grasping . I loved it

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Latifa

[RichGee]

Your art never ceases to amaze me....
Taking a deeper breath burns my lungs, but in a good way
as I move two steps closer to the edge, gather my balance
and shout from this apex of the world…
“I love you”…in hopes these harmonic echoes find your ears

Splendidly touching work...Love is grand!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[RichGee]

My pleasure

[Cryingkate]

OOOOHHH You Did it again !

This no doubt was tested,tried and truth from the Harmonic Spheres.
this came straight from the mans testes, thru his heart, and out his throat :-)

Dang ! Every beat was drummed from the earths core, I knew the rocks stood in ovation
When you said:
I have climbed this peak, fought the terrain, the cold,
clawed and scraped on this wondrous day,
so that the world below, humming their own tunes,
meandering like ants, performing their duties oblivious to all

I knew you damn well lived it , fought it and conquered it !
Truth always rings true Jack!
You know it and I know this ring was in precise tuning !

Wow ! I think you just shot a life's supply of testosterone with it :-)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Connie. Not sure but your review may require a mature rating

[Cryingkate]

Sorry.. :-) I made a typo and decided ya it fits I'll keep it there..

[Madalyn Beck]

Beautiful write! I adored these lines.

"For whatever beauty I may see, there is always you
and I truly want to look nowhere else"

Your words reach into my soul every time, Jack. Fantastic! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Madalyn

[Shirlena]

As good as this feeling you've transposed onto canvas is...I really hope whoever this is dedicated to future or present does hear Jack. She will have received one of her gifts...it gave me one :)

[Jack...]

Happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Shirlena.

[A. Amos]

elegant and mesmerizing piece you have created. Just felt every word deep and romantic...pure magic and epic

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Tina Louise UK]

sigh....beautiful Jack, wonderfully descriptive read...enjoyed :) x

[Jack...]

Thank you Tia.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lovely Jack.I am undone by your sweet lines, you are a true romantic :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome

[Marie]

Jack, this is lovely. How courageously you climbed those peaks and braved the weather just to make harmony with the echoes of love...

[Jack...]

Thank you Marie

[Sami Khalil]

In the moments of stillness, after climbing high and going low, we want to enjoy the balance and serenity of stillness. We want the mountains and valleys to echo the harmonic sounds. We want anticipation to be of good cheer...A wonderful poem...:).................

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)...................