Painting a Smile Senryu

 

 

 

Painting a smile

Is easier than it seems

If you use kindness

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Very positive senryu here Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Red. :)

[m.s.early]

very wonderful.... i caught myself smiling :)

[Jack...]

Happy you smiled my friend. :)

[Tina Louise UK]

wonderful little read Jack...enjoyed :) x

[Jack...]

I hope it made you smile. Thanks my friend.

[Ken Simm.]

Should be on everything from T shirts through bumper stickers to grave stones.

[Jack...]

Grave stones...now there's a thought. Thanks so much Ken. :)

[Claire in VA]

Profound.
I love succinctly written pieces!
~Claire

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Claire. :)

[DIVYA]

And then after a time we suddenly realize we don't need to paint it on at all. It comes on all on its own! Very cleverly and beautifully worded...

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Divya. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Kindness is the best brush, and creates the most beautiful smiles... A simple reminder to be kind; thanks, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Rita. :)

[SheWolfNLust]

a simple smile
worth a thousand words
neon brush strokes

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This made me smile, haha. Lovely!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Faces are the best canvas

[Jack...]

Unless they have the texture of burlap like mine. Thanks my friend. :)