Painting a Smile Senryu

 

 

 

Painting a smile

Is easier than it seems

If you use kindness

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

and thick sunny yellow paint. Love this.

[Zahra]

Yeah true, beautiful senryu :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Cassie]

This is so so true. Thank you for sharing.

[Jack...]

Thank you for you smile Sunshine.

[Blue]

Faking it is good
Just to lighten up the mood
--but misunderstood


Senryu is not my thing. Haha. Cool poem, Jack.

[Jack...]

I beg to differ...your smile to me seems genuine and the senryu you left for me is wonderful. Thanks so very much.

[LadySoDivine]

This is so sweet, yet so thoughtful at the same time. Kindness is so rare these days that when I see it, it actually brings tears to my eyes. Such a wonderful message you have in this cute little senryu, Jack. This truly is the ultimate true to making someone else happy. :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend and as much as I hate to admit it (male macho thing) I cry as well when I see kindness. It is actually overwhelming to me at times.

[LadySoDivine]

I know that feeling all to well, dear friend.

[Angel]

Paint a smile for me
On that handsome face of yours
And show me your heart

[Jack...]

Well, I am smiling my friend. And you always see my heart...I don't hide it very well. Thanks so much Angel.

[Angel]

You are welcome, as always, friend.
When it comes to poetry, I am a Jackaholic...

[Jack...]

I'm sure they have a treatment for that...

[Angel]

I think there's a rehab center in Nebraska, or somewhere like that...

[Eric Jameson]

This is one of the most simple, yet most true piece of composition I've ever read! What a great piece! Il est un chef-d'œuvre!

[Jack...]

Wow, your review is longer than the poem. :) Thank you so very much for those wonderful words my friend.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Marvellous!! :D 'Piece my friend and I loved the picture

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. :)

[Katyy]

Lovely Jack... It shows that anyone can make you smile.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Katyy]

Nae botha man.

[Laura Harrison]

Very true, and thank you for making me smile ;)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. :)