Possessed ~~~ by you

 

 

 

 

Possessed ~~~~ by you

 

 

Drenched in the reality of my imagination’s trust

A voice in my head sings in subtle verse

Feeling fingers probe my core

As my heartbeat comes in shades of two

 

Whispers, constant, gathering my attention

Pointing my eyes in eastward directions

Filling my psyche with caffeinated emotions

Earlier and earlier still, waving my pen

 

Massaged internally by caring hands

Tickled funny bones laugh out loud

As love holds back my salted tears

Breathing this very life into my words

 

I write, with reckless abandon…poetry

It comes in waves, ever present, like the tides

Crashing on believing beaches

Leaving sea foam trails for me to wander

 

Gardens bloom when my eyes are closed

Butterflies and hummingbirds play while I sleep

Beauty insists I walk when I can no longer stand

And I am not myself, nor do I want to be…for I am

 

Possessed by you, by everything that is…you

My thoughts are only of you, my dreams…you

My words, in this ever poetic form…you

My heart belongs to…you

 

I am poetically under your spell

Driven to pen, to impress, to embrace

Eternally in never ending seasons of melodic versed life

I coexist…possessed

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Some great imagery here. Good one Jack

[Jack...]

Thanks BR. I appreciate it.

[Lyn Anderson]

The internal massage, well, I thought might deserve a mature rating. :) Very nice.

[Jack...]

It's internal KL, you can't see it. :) Thanks so much my friend.

[Lyn Anderson]

I am assuming this is a joke back?

[Jack...]

Let's just say similar timing.

[kublakhan27]

Driven to pen, to impress, to embrace...I feel like this line should be on a plaque in my house, or any writer's house for that matter. This piece is very mantra-like with its evocations of spells and whispers and massages...it sets the reader at ease, and appeals to the mind's basest instincts. A truly breathtaking experience my friend.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate you stepping into my mind for a bit...just be careful, it's awful crowded in there.

[Sami Khalil]

The power of obsession when love leaves a permanent impression on our hearts...A wonderful write...:)...................

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Marie]

So that's where all your image of skies and seas and rainbows comes from...

[Jack...]

That's it Marie. You never thought is was me did you?

[Mark]

Yikes, it's... romantic, but kind of scary in an obsessive kind of way. Interesting write!

[Jack...]

Thanks Mark. I appreciate your Yikes! today. :)

[BlackRose]

Amazing piece anyone can get possessed by it, ha. You as always write so well. Makes me wonder at times if I measure up to writers like you. But then again everyone writes in there own way. :o)

[Jack...]

Everyone does write in their own way my friend and you do a stellar job. Thanks so much.

[BlackRose]

I am honored and humbled by ths (blushing). Thanks EVER sooo much. :o)

[BlackRose]

And your very welcome.

[Madalyn Beck]

Your words in this write are amazing! The writer is always a possessed soul, that is for sure, but you carry it well! Great job, Jack! Truly amazing and inspiring! xo :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Madalyn for your kind words.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A piece that really shows that entire range of unequal and unrelenting passion that never lets you escape well done, good read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Thomas

[A]

So wonderful! ...Every stanza!!!!
So much passion in this contaminating poem...
I love it! Thank you!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Anabela for your kindness.