Possessed ~~~ by you

 

 

 

 

Possessed ~~~~ by you

 

 

Drenched in the reality of my imagination’s trust

A voice in my head sings in subtle verse

Feeling fingers probe my core

As my heartbeat comes in shades of two

 

Whispers, constant, gathering my attention

Pointing my eyes in eastward directions

Filling my psyche with caffeinated emotions

Earlier and earlier still, waving my pen

 

Massaged internally by caring hands

Tickled funny bones laugh out loud

As love holds back my salted tears

Breathing this very life into my words

 

I write, with reckless abandon…poetry

It comes in waves, ever present, like the tides

Crashing on believing beaches

Leaving sea foam trails for me to wander

 

Gardens bloom when my eyes are closed

Butterflies and hummingbirds play while I sleep

Beauty insists I walk when I can no longer stand

And I am not myself, nor do I want to be…for I am

 

Possessed by you, by everything that is…you

My thoughts are only of you, my dreams…you

My words, in this ever poetic form…you

My heart belongs to…you

 

I am poetically under your spell

Driven to pen, to impress, to embrace

Eternally in never ending seasons of melodic versed life

I coexist…possessed

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Ramona Hughes]

This work is both eerie and beautiful. Your word choices and the form of this poem make it very enjoyable to read. The passion and feeling that you convey here are palatable and real. Well done! Thank you for an intense and powerful read.

Ramona Hughes

[Cassie]

wow!!!!! Keep on being possessed because I know such poetry will not escape your pen if you are possessed by me....hahaha lol, I didn't just say me...

[Jack...]

Oh yes you did. :) Thanks so much Sunshine.

[Blue]

"Possessed by you, by everything that is…you
My thoughts are only of you, my dreams…you
My words, in this ever poetic form…you
My heart belongs to…you

I am poetically under your spell
Driven to pen, to impress, to embrace
Eternally in never ending seasons of melodic versed life
I coexist…possessed"

Jack, Jack! This is passionate poetry as its finest. I so love this!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Angel]

This one is a bit weird...or maybe it is that picture. Those eyes give me the shivers...

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Angel.

[Rita L. Sev]

poetically under your spell... This is how you make your readers feel, Jack. Amazing piece - though the picture freaks me out just a bit...

[Jack...]

But it's just floating eyes Rita, not a floating head. :) Thanks so much my friend.

[Tina Louise UK]

Amazing read Jack...beautifully done my friend :) x

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Tia. I appreciate your kindness to me today.

[Brittany Zedalis]

The imagery here is wonderful. This has quickly become yet another of my favorites.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend.

[Claire in VA]

I really like this. I've not read a lot of your work, but it's different from the ones that I have read.
I can relate. This is hypnotizing. I keep rereading stanza 3 which I like mucho.
~Claire :)

[Jack...]

Thanks Claire. I try to change things up every once in a while. I appreciate you stopping by.

[Debbie_Philly]

I am poetically under your spell
Driven to pen, to impress, to embrace
Eternally in never ending seasons of melodic versed life
I coexist…possessed

WOW Jack just amazing... I really loved this flow and the emotions in this one... great job !!! :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Debbie. I appreciate you stopping by.

[s y e]

Oooooo, Jack, this is the kind of poetry that has me on the edge of my seat but liking it so much that I reread it over five times...

A romantic but obsessive poem, quite a different write from you but nonetheless magnificent! The imagery here is so vivid it was like a movie was playing on my computer screen...

I am blown away, literally.

[Jack...]

Thank you Sye. I always appreciate your kind words showing up on my pages.