Moonlit Good Night Kiss

Happy Valentines Day

 

 

Moonlit Good Night Kiss

 

 

Dancing on a cloud that dreams have washed along the shore

Counting every star drop feathered bliss

Walking with a happy heart to vistas near and far

Feeling still our moon lit good night kiss

 

Staying up past midnight with the sunlight in my eyes

Floating off to every sound I hear

Cellophane in colors wrapped so tightly ’round the skies

Candy coated marmalades appear

 

Riding on a zebra with its stripes the bluest green

Milkshakes, pizzas waiting by the door

Peppermints and lavenders are painted on the screen

Wanting that but this is so much more

 

Singing to a butterfly in harmonies of spring

Picking daisy petals sent by you

Falling to the rhythm of its ever moving wings

Hoping that this flower will be true

 

Paper hearts and roses and the smoothest chocolate blend

With sayings penned in crimson, old as time

Written out “I love yous” in the poems that I send

Will you always be my Valentine

 

Staring at the heavens just to see how long I can

Tossing gum drops in the great abyss

Funny what my mind does see while knowing that I am

Feeling still our moon lit good night kiss

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your words are always the sweetest .Yet again they touch me deep :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Jack :)

[Dhaye]

This is all about a paradise, Jack. With all those things you have mentioned in relation to your Valentine...this piece brings us to that romantic place.
So beautiful!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Dhaye.

[Tina Louise UK]

So very beautiful Jack, you are such the romantic :) x

[Jack...]

Thank you Tia.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love is delicious isn't it?

it's like all these things you mention in this poem...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Jacob.

[Rita L. Sev]

Paper hearts and roses and the smoothest chocolate blend
With sayings penned in crimson, old as time
Written out “I love yous” in the poems that I send
Will you always be my Valentine

Jack, everything you write is a Valentine, and so out of Hallmark's league! I love this sweet poem, especially the above verse.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Rita.

[Claire in VA]

Absolutely, positively sweet and beautiful!
I enjoyed reading this on the sweetest day of the year!
Happy Valentine's Day, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Claire

[Marie]

That must have been some kiss. It really sent you to Wonderland. Have you come back...?
From your poetry, I think you must still be there.

[Jack...]

I'm somewhere. Thanks so much Marie.

[TL Boehm]

Good lord. How do you do that with your words? Painting such vibrance, and romance. It's lovely to read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Tammy

[Aashish Pant]

beautifully portrayed feelings....gentle and soothing lines...

[Jack...]

Thanks for your kindness