Moonlit Good Night Kiss

Happy Valentines Day

 

 

Moonlit Good Night Kiss

 

 

Dancing on a cloud that dreams have washed along the shore

Counting every star drop feathered bliss

Walking with a happy heart to vistas near and far

Feeling still our moon lit good night kiss

 

Staying up past midnight with the sunlight in my eyes

Floating off to every sound I hear

Cellophane in colors wrapped so tightly ’round the skies

Candy coated marmalades appear

 

Riding on a zebra with its stripes the bluest green

Milkshakes, pizzas waiting by the door

Peppermints and lavenders are painted on the screen

Wanting that but this is so much more

 

Singing to a butterfly in harmonies of spring

Picking daisy petals sent by you

Falling to the rhythm of its ever moving wings

Hoping that this flower will be true

 

Paper hearts and roses and the smoothest chocolate blend

With sayings penned in crimson, old as time

Written out “I love yous” in the poems that I send

Will you always be my Valentine

 

Staring at the heavens just to see how long I can

Tossing gum drops in the great abyss

Funny what my mind does see while knowing that I am

Feeling still our moon lit good night kiss

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching, satirical and crafted piece, well done.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Blue]

"Funny what my mind does see while knowing that I am
Feeling still our moon lit good night kiss"

Jack. You are a wonderful poet. I know you know that already.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

"Paper hearts and roses and the smoothest chocolate blend

With sayings penned in crimson, old as time"

All splendid...:).......................

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[s y e]

Ah my Jackomantic, this was utterly beautiful and romantic. You really are the king of romance.

// Paper hearts and roses and the smoothest chocolate blend
With sayings penned in crimson, old as time
Written out “I love yous” in the poems that I send
Will you always be my Valentine //

This stanza was just mind blowing my friend. Everything you write is romantic. You know I love all your poems. Well done as always, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate you.

[Brittany Zedalis]

I can't even think of the proper words to use that would serve this poem justice. Truly amazing.

[Jack...]

Thanks for your kindness Brittany.

[zephyr]

Riding on a zebra with its stripes the bluest green
Milkshakes, pizzas waiting by the door
Peppermints and lavenders are painted on the screen
Wanting that but this is so much more

What a whimsical write. You have some fierce skill, man.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much.

[Shirlena]

I really enjoyed the rhythm of this poem...because I read them and they are often good, I cringe at poems that are always written in that ho' hum type of rhythm and rhyme but I appreciate those who can rhyme in a way that restores my confidence in a rhyming poem, like you and the content is as ravishing as ever.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend.

[Angela L Garratt]

What a beautiful poem, and so appropriate for this time of year. I enjoyed every word.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Angela.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wonderfully romantic write, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you Travis.

[m.s.early]

Sweet, delicate, visual, chaste, youthful. It draws love from the poet's heart and graces our reading.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much X. I appreciate your kindness.