If you were mine...

 

If you were mine…

 

 

If you were mine…our footsteps would

 

dance on moonlit verandas

while candle lit flickerings enticed my smiled reflections

with your arms tightly around me

 

symphonies would play to the rhythm of your charm

as we swayed in the essence of forever

on cloud soft concertos of affection’s melodic whispers

 

eternal echoes would sing in harmony to your eyes,

hauntingly dark invitations to my endless destination,

soothing reflections comforting weathered longings

 

If you were mine…satin beaches would

 

eclipse tan line passions

beneath glistening waves of aquamarine salt water bliss

gently caressing the depth of our love

 

palm leaf shadows of cooling design would weave embracing patterns

of ocean fed breezes tickling our naked forms

as sea foam fingers probe pearl smooth valleys

 

sunset tides would tease beneath star orchid heavens

blooming of every wished for fantasy…

lasting happily ever after upon sandcastles dreams

 

 

If you were mine…my life would

 

be a mosaic of delirious euphoric visions

in constant creative motion delivering sincerely

every ounce of joy your heart could desire

 

painted in the sweet essence of everything that is your spirit

vibrant in wonders of fragrant poetic offerings

versed in accordance with your every need

 

believing that happiness can begin with a smile,

walk along endless streams of worshiped blessings,

remaining satisfied and forevermore yours

 

If you were mine…oh, if you were mine

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Emma Grace Tennyson]

It's so dreamy. I feel like it could float off my screen.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Emma.

[BlackRose]

I'm complete swept away into precious pearls of this luster. Once again in awe. Another phenomenal piece. With a write like this any woman will forever be yours. :o)

[Jack...]

Well my friend, I wouldn't bet a whole lot on that, but thanks so very much. I am humble by your kind words.

[BlackRose]

Don't be modest. When I read works this good, I can't lie. And as for that special lady for you (if you don't have already), who knows. ;o) I didn't think much so in life and what do I know I'm lucky what we have is so special to last eternally. ;o)

[BlackRose]

My mine in my life outside here, I mean.

[Jack...]

Thanks again my friend...I understand.

[BlackRose]

....... :o)

[Brittany Zedalis]

painted in the sweet essence of everything that is your spirit
vibrant in wonders of fragrant poetic offerings
versed in accordance with your every need

Geesh, you are so talented. I love this poem.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Brittany for your kind words. These words come from deep inside my heart, so talent...maybe not...a romantic...okay. I accept that. :)

[Marie]

If you could keep those promises, any woman would be glad to be yours...

[Jack...]

Well...........I guess we will see Marie. Thank you so very much for your kind words.

[Lyn Anderson]

Mmmm. Beautiful imagery. Sentimental and sweet.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much KL. Happy you stopped by for a visit. I always appreciate your kind words.

[Frieda P]

Oh my, this is simply blissful, you had me at 'dance on moonlit verandas' this is utterly romantic, so many euphoric phrases and references here. 'beneath glistening waves of aquamarine salt water bliss' took my breath away, actually the entire piece of work did...sigh. Stunning Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Frieda. You have restored my faith in my ability to write romantic poetry. With the exception of Anabela and prior to you reviewing this, the only readers I had were men...I was beginning to wonder...

[Frieda P]

You just posted it today Jack, you know it takes us gals longer, have to put our faces on and stuff before we can read this kind of poetry. ;-)

[Jack...]

Well, glancing at the beauty staring at me from your avatar, I can say it was definitely worth the wait. :)

[Frieda P]

I hired an entire team of make-up artists and hair stylists just to read this one! ;-)

[Jack...]

They told me, said it was the easiest job they've ever had. Didn't really have to do anything. Cha-ching!!

[Frieda P]

Men...pfft and pssh, you're clueless. ;-P

[Jack...]

Dire Straits - Money for nothin.....

[Frieda P]

Love that song...you're still off your rocker ;-)

[AngeloRosell]

Simply beautiful Jack.... Very well written along with all your other pieces ! You sir are a great writer ! I hope to read many more of your fine works ! Keep it up !

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Angelo. Your kindness humbles me this day.

[Baby Ricochet]

Jack: The romantic Bard of the WC writing lovely poems to the feminine soul.
BR:Poetry to Yell at traffic

[Jack...]

Hey this has got to be better what I yell at traffic. It would need a XXX rating if I posted it here. Thanks so much my friend.

[m.s.early]

So very beautiful Jack. I usually ignore pictures posted with poems, but damn I've felt like the one you picked for this one.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. I always try to pick one I feel relates as best I can.

[MyOpenThirdEye]

This is some professional poetry, really nothing an amateur like me could say to review such a poem. It was flawless and beautiful.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. I appreciate your review of my work. No worries, I am merely an amateur poking away at a keyboard.