Tossing my words

Tossing my words

A Poem by Jack...

 

 

 

 

Tossing my words

 

 

My pen oozes feelings in splattering ink

Lines in symmetrical visions of truth

Carved from a heart that is desperate to think

Somewhere inside sleeps the essence of proof

 

Reaching that point where the matters at play

Running around in my mind’s subtle crest

Hoping to find the right sentence to say

This is my love for I gave you my best

 

When is enough more than money can buy

Simple the pleasures awaiting your touch

Tiny endeavors on wings set to fly

Sunlight and flowers and wishes and such

 

Still comes another of phrases to win

Sweeping you off to the end of my time

Spinning in circles as yet to begin

Lost and alone as he utters, “you're mine”

 

Why is it always the soft hearted fall

Deep in the crevice of fading desire

Charcoal and ashes, the flame’s ending call

Diamonds and rubies now what you require

 

So as I sit at this desk in the cold

Staring beyond every dream I might see

Endless the verses these memories hold

Tossing my words at what now can not be

 

© 2014 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

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Superb! So sad romance. In the reels of the outback hoping to catch that long lost submerged of once was... I know this don't quite certain in part, just came to me. You know me sometimes.
@{/:o)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

yes I do know you and I am the fortunate one for that. Thanks so very much my friend
BlackRose

10 Years Ago

Thanks. :o) My pleasure. @{/:o)
Another romantic piece, neatly created my friend...good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend.
"Deep in the crevice of fading desire
Charcoal and ashes, the flame’s ending call
Diamonds and rubies now what you require

So as I sit at this desk in the cold"

Love keeps our ink going and the flame of the spirit burning. We want to be able to say the words: " I love you, you are mine."...But we need the essence of proof from our beloved. You pen oozes with beauty...:).............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Sami. I appreciate you stopping by...always you are the first to visit and that .. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)..................

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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