Twilight's Shimmer - A collaboration - Frieda and Jack

Once more I am honored to write a poem with Frieda. Who says dreams don't come true?

 

 

Twilight's Shimmer

 

 

Misty mornings long for silent shade

drenched in glistening opalescent

windswept sighs on feathered breezes

seek the essence of your fragrance

 

languish in moments sheer contentment

flowers scenting the nape of the neck

eyes soak in brilliant twilight's shimmer

amidst the ginger of your aromatic flavor

 

 the sunrise blooms of your beauty

I gaze upon this tempting reflection

in limpid pools of dark sepia dreams

silently quenching my thirsty desires  

 

delights of silken'd utterances bliss

kiss upon my heart's zesty appetite

hungering for the gusto of your affection

urges of  persuasive velvet'd silent echoes

 

savoring these moonlit moments

within delicate arms, anxious sighs

 

enraptured in this tender night's embrace

floating upon gossamer clouds of your love

Author's Note

A collaboration - Frieda and Jack



Thank you so much for reading our poem today.

Reviews

[Odysseus Wanders]

Yeah cool. Im a virgin to combo poetry. And you rascals just popped my cherry. Nice work.
I like the male female back forth... creates an interesting tug, you know... its odd, because its two people where there usually is just one... I think it takes a certain amount of trust, in self, in other, to write this style of poetry... a great collaboration.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Terry. Frieda is so very easy to write with. When I write with her it almost feels as if one heart holds the pen. I appreciate your kind words.

[Frieda P]

Wow, I don't think anyone has ever popped their cherry in a review that I can recall...was it good for you? ha....thanks Terry! ;-)

[s y e]

// the sunrise blooms of your beauty
I gaze upon this tempting reflection
in limpid pools of dark sepia dreams
silently quenching my thirsty desires //

Wow you guys, another beautiful, romantic poem. I love how your worlds collide when you write together. I love how I have the pleasure of reading you both when your pens are merged to one. It's just simply divine.

You blew me away, I'm caught in the middle of being in Jersey and Texas, lol. :)> And the music, perfection. I love that song, it's one of my favourites from Jason.

Flip flops & all that jazz!

[Jack...]

Thank so much sweet Sye. Every time I have the opportunity to write with Frieda it just proves to me over and over again that dreams can come true.

[s y e]

Dreams can true if you believe hard enough my friend....

[Frieda P]

You're too sweet noodlebumble, thank you!

[Lyn Anderson]

A seamless, sensual, romantic collaboration. You have a lovely poetic chemistry.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much KL. Frieda brings all of the beauty, I just help her lift that heavy pen. :) I appreciate you stopping by.