Yeah cool. Im a virgin to combo poetry. And you rascals just popped my cherry. Nice work.
I like the male female back forth... creates an interesting tug, you know... its odd, because its two people where there usually is just one... I think it takes a certain amount of trust, in self, in other, to write this style of poetry... a great collaboration.
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10 Years Ago
Thanks so much Terry. Frieda is so very easy to write with. When I write with her it almost feels as.. read moreThanks so much Terry. Frieda is so very easy to write with. When I write with her it almost feels as if one heart holds the pen. I appreciate your kind words.
10 Years Ago
Wow, I don't think anyone has ever popped their cherry in a review that I can recall...was it good f.. read moreWow, I don't think anyone has ever popped their cherry in a review that I can recall...was it good for you? ha....thanks Terry! ;-)
It is good when two writers can work and create together. Thank you for sharing the amazing poem of love.
Coyote
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10 Years Ago
Thanks so very much Coyote for taking the time to read and comment on our work. this was fun to writ.. read moreThanks so very much Coyote for taking the time to read and comment on our work. this was fun to write.
10 Years Ago
Thanks John, so glad you enjoyed our collaboration.
This is delightful...as beautiful as intoxication...you all must engage in more collaborations...it is a privilege for the others...I am really curious as to who wrote what...but nevertheless it flows in unity! Magnificent!
Thanks so much my friend. I actually did a count last week and Frieda and I have 14 collaborations p.. read moreThanks so much my friend. I actually did a count last week and Frieda and I have 14 collaborations posted on this site. I am happy you enjoyed this.
10 Years Ago
Only 14, sheesh...thanks so much Chandradhish.
10 Years Ago
My pleasure Jack...I would be viewing your works soon...please visit mine!
I rather think that this combo displays the best of both of you, well written, researched and braces the reader without letting go of the narrative, well done, good read.
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10 Years Ago
Thomas your kindness is always appreciate on our poem pages. Thanks so much for stopping by and read.. read moreThomas your kindness is always appreciate on our poem pages. Thanks so much for stopping by and reading. Frieda makes it so easy.
Yeah cool. Im a virgin to combo poetry. And you rascals just popped my cherry. Nice work.
I like the male female back forth... creates an interesting tug, you know... its odd, because its two people where there usually is just one... I think it takes a certain amount of trust, in self, in other, to write this style of poetry... a great collaboration.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much Terry. Frieda is so very easy to write with. When I write with her it almost feels as.. read moreThanks so much Terry. Frieda is so very easy to write with. When I write with her it almost feels as if one heart holds the pen. I appreciate your kind words.
10 Years Ago
Wow, I don't think anyone has ever popped their cherry in a review that I can recall...was it good f.. read moreWow, I don't think anyone has ever popped their cherry in a review that I can recall...was it good for you? ha....thanks Terry! ;-)
and that song "Somewhere" by Isreal "IZ" Kamakawiwo'ole breath taking... he was an activist for the independence of the Hawaiian Islands.. his beautiful voice and activity will be missed..
~~redzone
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My friend, you have me at a loss here. I can't hear the music, my sweet melodic writing partner gets.. read moreMy friend, you have me at a loss here. I can't hear the music, my sweet melodic writing partner gets all of the credit for that. I am happy you enjoyed this poem though, I failed to say that in the prior response. truthfully, I am thrilled you enjoyed it, Frieda is an amazing poet and I am the fortunate one who gets to tag along for a while.
10 Years Ago
My favorite over the rainbow, he is missed, I agree.
Frieda, Jack.. wonderful... you know how most collaborations you can tell each voice, but in the ones you two do, while I might be able to tell which lines each oof you wrote, what really stands out is how they come across as one voice, exppressing the possibilities of love, of emotion, of the passion between two people... so the poems you two write are unique and artistic.. I am glad to be able to read them.. deliciously dreamy.. ~~redzone
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10 Years Ago
Thanks so much my friend. Actually Frieda wrote the entire poem, I just added the last word lov...oo.. read moreThanks so much my friend. Actually Frieda wrote the entire poem, I just added the last word lov...oops.
10 Years Ago
Don't believe a word, if his pen is moving, he's lying ;-)
Frieda! Jack! This is beautiful! Again! You two make the best poems together! Really!
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Katherine, it is always the brightest spot of my day when I get the opportunity to write w.. read moreThank you Katherine, it is always the brightest spot of my day when I get the opportunity to write with an amazing poet like Frieda.
You both know how to engage the senses as well as the heart with your romantic writes. Another wonderful collaboration - though the pic, for some reason, creeped me out...
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10 Years Ago
Thanks so much Rita...don't look at the picture...oh no, it's staring at you. :)
I appreciat.. read moreThanks so much Rita...don't look at the picture...oh no, it's staring at you. :)
I appreciate your kindness always, but you know the beauty behind this and the other collaborations we do is always Frieda. I just supply the humor. :)
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..