Good Morning Beautiful

 

 

 

 

Good Morning Beautiful               

 

I crave you this morning

For you are my sun

Your smile my brightness

When morning does come

 

Alone at the table

No sound to be heard

Just pouring your coffee

Not saying a word

 

I sit and I stare

Out the window this day

Such beauty before me

In nature’s display

 

Still nothing can reason

With how I do feel

When you rise to greet me

I know this is real

 

I flip through the paper

Though I do not read

My mind is a wander

Of what I believe

 

I dream of the moment

I look in your eyes

And whisper I love you

Oh won’t you please rise

 

It seems like forever

Yet only a night

The last time I saw you

A beautiful sight

 

So I sit here waiting

Until you I see

My day will be perfect

When you smile at me

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Raymond Federle]

Very nice. Rhyme and meter were awesome! Good one Jack! :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. Glad you enjoyed this.

[Ruth]

Ah, Jack, so beautiful! Anticipation like this is elating...lovely hon x

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Happy you stopped by today.

[Ruth]

Always my pleasure Jack, have a lovely day x

[Robbie~xoxo~]

awww This brings true meaning to "Good Morning"....
So warm and inviting~
Thank you for sharing the love!! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Robbie. It is nice to see you again. I believe the sun is shining a little brighter now through my window. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

awwwww I feel the sun shining too!
It is always a pleasure to read you, Jack! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Like I left a review for another author. It takes two to tango and it takes one to jingle and jangle. Life is about sharing that daily bread along with the sweet and bitter coffees...A wonderful write...:)......

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[Lily Mae]

No better way to start out the day... :)

[Jack...]

Thank you Lily Mae. Just having you visit is the best way to start my day.

[A. Amos]

Your poetry are always full of soul my friend, take me into world of romance:)

[Jack...]

Come on in...there's plenty of room. Thanks so very much.

[Cassie]

sad joyful write, aha!!! I enjoyed as usual

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my Good Morning Sunshine.

[Blue]

I hope this poem has an audio. I will then save it on my phone and make it as my alarm ringtone. That way, I'll be more motivated to wake up and start my day. :P

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. Happy this made you smile.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, I'd have clunked her over the head. Oops! Wrong genre. I hope that made you laugh. Anyway, as always, you serve enough syrup with the pancakes, but not too much.:)

[Jack...]

Thanks my friend. I'm sure you would. :) And yes, that did make me laugh.

[s y e]

// I dream of the moment
I look in your eyes
And whisper I love you
Oh won’t you please rise //

/sigh/ this is divine... Out of this world even, I literally think you blew me away and I landed in Texas - pretty sure that's where I am!

You never cease to amaze me my friend, always being the kind, caring man you are and just pouring your heart into every poem you do. The name Jackomantic will never fade or get old... You're too amazing.

This is just fantastic, the imagery and wording is pure heaven. I loved this so much, I'm putting it in my favourites so I can read it again when I feel blue but right now, I am sitting here with a gigantic smile on my face and the sun is shining all thanks to you.

[Jack...]

What a wonderful review my friend. Geez, the sun is shining so bright on me now I need sunglasses inside. Thank you for your sweet words and your kindness Sye.