Good Morning Beautiful

 

 

 

 

Good Morning Beautiful               

 

I crave you this morning

For you are my sun

Your smile my brightness

When morning does come

 

Alone at the table

No sound to be heard

Just pouring your coffee

Not saying a word

 

I sit and I stare

Out the window this day

Such beauty before me

In nature’s display

 

Still nothing can reason

With how I do feel

When you rise to greet me

I know this is real

 

I flip through the paper

Though I do not read

My mind is a wander

Of what I believe

 

I dream of the moment

I look in your eyes

And whisper I love you

Oh won’t you please rise

 

It seems like forever

Yet only a night

The last time I saw you

A beautiful sight

 

So I sit here waiting

Until you I see

My day will be perfect

When you smile at me

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Mark]

Very wonderful crafting and it's something very special to take an average every day event and turn it to magic through love.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Mark.

[Linda alexander]

My day will be perfect
When you smile at me
Great write, if some one can make your day perfect, that is an excellent situation, succeeded in expressing intense longing for her.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Linda. I appreciate your kind words.

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care

[Scott Metro]

Very lovely Jack...just waiting...
She is your day..!!!

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. It's nice to start the day with a smile coming in your direction.

[Scott Metro]

Yep......
Scott.......

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Awwwwwww :3 this is so wonderful!!! What an awesome write! Good job, I loved it! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Maggie for stopping by today. I appreciate your kindness.

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Aw, anytime. :)

[Coll Silvermoon]

That is fantastic! Such romance, and passion. I felt it in every line.
Great writing!!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend. Glad you enjoyed this little poem.

[Coll Silvermoon]

it may be little but it's powerful and VERY well written.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Such beauty before me
In nature’s display

Such a sweet and loving poem. I really love this one.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Brittany. Happy you stopped by.

[redflutterby]

Really...I'm not that beautiful and youre going to make all the women here jealous if you dont stop writing poems about me. I told you send them in private... geez... ha!! And I like bacon with my eggs...bagel and cream cheese on the side. Or a blueberry muffin...mmm....now that sounds yummy!!
;-P

[Jack...]

Well my sweet friend, you are beautiful to me. I decided not to hide it anymore...and would you like those eggs over easy?

[redflutterby]

Make sure the whites not runny but the yolks soft. Lol... ;-)

[Jack...]

Oh don't worry, I remember dear. Just wasn't sure if you wanted something different today.

[redflutterby]

Hahaha.... sssshhhhh...;-D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is kind of sad, because she is not there yet, and maybe only the idea of her will share breakfast with him...but he has poured her coffee and hopefully he will actually be with her...i vision him looking out the window at the beauty of nature and comparing her to that beauty.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Jacob and you are mostly right, but when I wrote it, in my mind, she was there, just not awake yet.

[Marie]

A wonderful love poem...a lucky woman to receive it...

[Jack...]

Happy you received it Marie. Thank you so much.

[Frieda P]

I know you're probably sick of me saying sigh...but sigh.

'I crave you this morning
For you are my sun'

You had me right there. This is vintage Jack poetry I fell in love with. Blissful, I hope I didn't miss breakfast.

[Jack...]

Never will that day come my sweet friend. Thanks so much for always bringing a huge smile to my face.

No, not at all...peach or strawberry jam?

[Frieda P]

Both, I'm famished after reading this relish'd delight. :-)