Good Morning Beautiful

 

 

 

 

Good Morning Beautiful               

 

I crave you this morning

For you are my sun

Your smile my brightness

When morning does come

 

Alone at the table

No sound to be heard

Just pouring your coffee

Not saying a word

 

I sit and I stare

Out the window this day

Such beauty before me

In nature’s display

 

Still nothing can reason

With how I do feel

When you rise to greet me

I know this is real

 

I flip through the paper

Though I do not read

My mind is a wander

Of what I believe

 

I dream of the moment

I look in your eyes

And whisper I love you

Oh won’t you please rise

 

It seems like forever

Yet only a night

The last time I saw you

A beautiful sight

 

So I sit here waiting

Until you I see

My day will be perfect

When you smile at me

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh to be loved in this way is what we all hope for dearest Jack :)

[Jack...]

It can happen Vidya, you just have to find the right person and hopefully you have.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes I think I have .You are welcome sweet friend :)

[kublakhan27]

I am smitten by the gentle beauty of this piece and it's unconditional declaration of emotion. This is a true ballad that would not be out of place next to Keats...I know you don't like those comparisons but I really do take that vibe from this poem. How sweet a morning such as this would be. Thank you for sharing such an openly heartfelt work my friend.

[Jack...]

Steve, you humble me always with your kind words. Thank you so very much my friend.

[Laura Harrison]

Utter perfection! Added this to my favorites :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Oh it's as if you speaking to me Jack, I jest, well done, good read.

[Jack...]

Thomas, how do you take your eggs? The coffee is ready. :) Thanks so much my friend.

[Chaz Hemsworth]

I think it's beautiful. The meter is really well done, as a percussionist rhythm really means a lot me.
Sadly, I can't relate to it.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Katherine R.]

Oh, look, Sye showed me another awesome piece!
Excellent job, Jack! You're the best romance poet I know. This is a wonderful piece.

[Jack...]

Katherine, you have brought a smile to this tired face today. thank you so very much for your kindness.

[Katherine R.]

I love it when I can do that! Smiles are good!

Your welcome, Jack. It's always a pleasure reading you're work.

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is wonderful Jack..... you had me from "Good Morning Beautiful."


YB

[Jack...]

Well then, Good Morning Beautiful. Thanks so very much my friend.

[Yellow Butterfly]

(Now I'm blushing)

Thank you kind sir and Good Morning Handsome to you... :)

[Jack...]

Wow, now I'm blushing... :)

[Sue Hart]

Romantic admittance of love. A lovely poem. Nice work.

[Jack...]

Thank you Sue for stopping by today.

[Rita L. Sev]

Jack, this is beautiful. You paint such a realistic picture of affection in your poems.

[Jack...]

Thank you Rita. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[Brook]

Oh Jack.
This is... DIVINE.
I feel like this is something that would be spoken as a monologue in a movie, over the top of a romantic scene. You're a wonderful writer.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Brookly. I appreciate your kind words.