Good Morning Beautiful

 

 

 

 

Good Morning Beautiful               

 

I crave you this morning

For you are my sun

Your smile my brightness

When morning does come

 

Alone at the table

No sound to be heard

Just pouring your coffee

Not saying a word

 

I sit and I stare

Out the window this day

Such beauty before me

In nature’s display

 

Still nothing can reason

With how I do feel

When you rise to greet me

I know this is real

 

I flip through the paper

Though I do not read

My mind is a wander

Of what I believe

 

I dream of the moment

I look in your eyes

And whisper I love you

Oh won’t you please rise

 

It seems like forever

Yet only a night

The last time I saw you

A beautiful sight

 

So I sit here waiting

Until you I see

My day will be perfect

When you smile at me

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Such a lovely piece always love reading your work.


Thank you for sharing this Breathtaking piece.


God bless. Benita

[Prabha Salimath]

The flow of the poem dint stop me anywhere at any point so easy like air.
Your love for your Mistress is described in very simple and sweetly way nice one.
It's a perfect thing to have a man like you described above thanks for sharing.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

What a nice and lovely tribute. What a lucky lady she is. What a lovely way that you FEEL too. I can see this poem with the morning birds chirping and the gentle sun coming in the window... the smell of coffee and toast in the air ..... ahhh heaven :)

[LadySoDivine]

Such a sweet and lovely poem, Jack! Like the gentle touch of a feather. Really enjoyed reading it, very beautiful poem! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend.

[Demii]

This is so sweet, kind and gentle. It reminds me of my grandparents and how my papa use to talk about my gran smiling at him, and it was the best thing he use to wake up to.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Demii, I appreciate your kindness today.

[MsJewel]

So simple and so sweet. You have penned the perfect love poem Jack. I smiled the whole time I read it...
Beautiful writing my friend!
:) Julie

p.s. In my library this goes - it's a keeper

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Julie. I always appreciate your kindness.

[R. L. Hill]

I LOVE this..........Makes me ache. I want to be loved like that!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoed this one today.

[R. L. Hill]

I did. Very much so. It made me envious of the woman you wrote this for...

[Jack...]

Well, I never make bacon and tell, so I guess that will have to be my little secret. :)

[R. L. Hill]

Gah! Lucky devil...Lol

[BlackRose]

Simply scrumptous. Rhyming robust as you are also great at. Truely enjoyed the delish piece of your writing.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. Happy you stopped by.

[BlackRose]

And happy too that I was able.:o)

[Lydia Shutter]

What a gorgeous write this is, Jack....filled with romantic longing. The scene you set for us is a "slice of life" and it is easy to relate to. Great imagery....and rhyming. You are in Valentine's Day mode as many of the poets on the site are! :) Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Lydi. It seems I am always in a Valentine's mood...well most of the time. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a romantic soul...which is wonderful!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem this morning. I did like the good breakfast in the photo. Always good to begin the day with a positive outlook. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend. I appreciate you stopping by...coffee?