Songs in the key of romance

Songs in the key of romance

A Poem by Jack...

 

 

 

 

Songs in the key of romance

 

 

Inside the longing as deep shadows dance

Lost in the passion of you

Offering songs in the key of romance

Violins sing right on cue

Endless this rhythm of love on display

Yearnings melodically free

Orchestras waiting for their turn to play

Until you are here with me

© 2014 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

Oh, it's an acrostic...in case you were wondering.

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Fantastic acrostic! Jack, your romantic nature is really in full swing this week. This would be a super Valentine's Day card for your special someone. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your always sweet reviews of my work Lydi. I appreciate you more than you.. read more
OH a romantic acrostic, leave it to you Jack...gotta love those violins singing right on cue when you're in love, this one hums a sweet melody my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Frieda. This huge smile I wear now is because of you.
This is a nice acrostic Jack and very nicely written.

// Orchestras waiting for their turn to play
Until you are here with me //

These lines were amazing. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sye. I appreciate your kindness.
I like the idea of orchestras waiting for the melodied of love to return , to display an awesome show , to sing the roght cues , to make even the shadows dance...A great one...:)......................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Sami. I can always count on you to stop by for a visit.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Always if I'm by a computer...Welcome muchly...:)...................

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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