Songs in the key of romance

 

 

 

 

Songs in the key of romance

 

 

Inside the longing as deep shadows dance

Lost in the passion of you

Offering songs in the key of romance

Violins sing right on cue

Endless this rhythm of love on display

Yearnings melodically free

Orchestras waiting for their turn to play

Until you are here with me

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Oh, it's an acrostic...in case you were wondering.

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

What a lovely acrostic this is, with a very pleasant flow :) A heart just wants to love, and I believe its melody is everlasting.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Michelle for your kind words today. Happy you enjoyed this.

[Wuji]

I think the key of romance is F. But I suppose it depends on the instrument :P nice write!

[Jack...]

I understand. Thank you so much my friend.

[Marie]

It's a beautiful acrostic, and I didn't realize that untill you explained...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A short but flowed piece that related well and is easy to read, well done.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Thomas.

[Rita L. Sev]

Now that is some SMOOTH poetry, my friend. Love the flow, heard the melody as I read this... and I did not see that it was an acrostic at first. Clever poet, you!

[Jack...]

Thanks Rita. I love when you visit my world.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is lovely as is the norm my friend ,your lines as ever are flawless:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Vidya. your kindness is always a bright spot in my day.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you for being such a sweetheart and you are welcome :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A very clever, beautiful write. Pen on, Jack! This wonderful work!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Gleb.

[Pryde Foltz]

Offering songs in the key of romance
Violins sing right on cue
Endless this rhythm of love on display
Yearnings melodically free

We love you, too.

[Jack...]

Thank you Pryde, now it is my heart that is singing

[Lyn Anderson]

Another romantic and well executed piece.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much KL. Your kindness always makes my day.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is the first acrostic I've read on here. It's so so sweet! I love it!

[Jack...]

Thank you Brittany, I have written a few, but don't uaully broadcast it...I kind of wait to see if readers can figure it out...not this time though. :) Thank you again for your kindness.