Across Symphonic Seas

 

 

Across Symphonic Seas

 

Echoed surf a’ whispered shores

Melodic rhythm ~ twilight’s dance

Alone my love does play for you

On mystic strings in winged romance

 ~

Neath heartbeat sails of velvet skies

Darkened shadow’s purple haze

Transparent flows a’ shimmered light

To harmonize with lonely days

 ~

For hear my love, eurhythmic dreams

Hypnotically our song takes flight

Lyrically of purest sound

Across symphonic seas this night

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Justsimplyjulia]

the words never fail you do they? this is agonizingly beautiful, and im steaming jealous of your way with
words.
beautiful.
-dragon

[Jack...]

My friend, words often fail me, you would be surprised at what can come out of my mouth at times. Not always so pretty. Thank you so much though, I always appreciate your kind words.

[Vidya Bacchus]

A most musically romantic poem .I love this Jack :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Blue]

Beautifully penned as always, with a style that seems to have a magical touch. I love the picture, anyway. :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

A flowing song, beautiful as always, Jack. I especially enjoyed your second stanza, which could stand alone.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Rita, you make my smile sing

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A piece that reads best with red wine and heartache, well done, good read.

[Jack...]

Thomas, your kindness is always appreciated.

[Raymond Federle]

Oh wow. This is very, very good Jack. I'd submit this somewhere is I were you. Well done! ;)

[Jack...]

I did, I submitted it right here. Thanks so much Raymond.

[Ruth]

Glorious Jack! Sunny day here, a cuppa and this, wonderful x

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Poppy.

[Pryde Foltz]

For hear my love, eurhythmic dreams
Hypnotically our song takes flight
Lyrically of purest sound
Across symphonic seas this night

I don't know why but it reminded me of the sound a flying fish makes as it skims along the water.

[Jack...]

Thanks Pryde, can't say I have ever heard that sounds, but it sounds lovely.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Yep...another poem of lovely grandeur. :]

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Brittany

[Buddhistboy73]

A melodic flowing piece here..."Hypnotically our song takes flight....lyrically of purest sound"
And then the title repeated at the final line...enjoyed the journey here...thanks for sharing..

BB

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much for stopping by.