Posies' Bloom

Found the photo ~ the poem found me

 

 

 

Posies’ Bloom

 

Yon charcoal skies, horizon’s shade

Warm the breeze on flowing hair

Skin of whispered poet’s phrase

Dreaming of a heart to share

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Alone you stand in posies’ bloom

Blinded by the purest love

Fragrant as this rose appears

On the wings of windswept dove

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Just a superbly beautiful write. Love the imagery.

[Jack...]

Thank you Pryde. Always I am thrilled when you visit.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Just lovely *a billion sighs* Genius, to say the very least. Had to add this to my favorites!

[Jack...]

Thank you Gleb. Thank you so very much, this poem was very special to me.

[Marie]

The poem is lovely, and so is the picture.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Marie.

[s y e]

// Skin of whispered poet’s phrase
Dreaming of a heart to share //

You have me swooning here my friend. You know, there is no one who can write like you do, no one who can be as romantic as you, you're my Jackomantic and ain't no one gonna beat you. ;-) I loved this one, so romantic as always.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sye. I am happy you liked this as it is a special one to me.

[junaid altaf]

skin of whispered poet......
wow what words!
simply hats off sir!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[junaid altaf]

your welcome

[Shaquana Adams]

Beautiful flow and word play. Great work Jack!

[Sami Khalil]

You captivate your reader with words abd beautiful imagery and you captivate her with your immense love and passion...Excellent...:)................................

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami. This felt so good to write.

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful...:).........................

[Latifa]

beautiful Jack I enjoyed it

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Latifa

[Lyn Anderson]

A nice, flowing, captivating verse. I would be tempted to add an "A" before the windswept, but I am impossible, as I follow neither form nor flow nor rules of meter and tempo, just GUT.

[Jack...]

Thanks KL, but this one to me needed to flow. I did originally have "A" in there, but it didn't feel right to me. I appreciate you taking the time to read and offer your always wonderful thoughts on my poetry.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This has such a nice flow to it. It was a pleasure to read.

[Jack...]

Thank you Brittany for your kindness this morning.