Thinking of you

Thinking of you

A Poem by Jack...

 

Thinking of you

 

Frozen in layers of lemon drop frosting

Running for love on the snow covered lawn

Interest in all that this morning does offer

Entering each as if only a song

                           ~

Dancing to dreams on the edge of tomorrow

Asking a question I hope will be true

Pausing a moment to glance your direction

Writing this poem while thinking of you

© 2014 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
Thank you for reading

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i like the lemon drop frosting too. lovely write that i can certainly relate to. we just got three inches of snow.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much X. Build me a snowman, will ya? We don't get much snow down here. :)
Not that it matters, but I like the lemon drop. Anyway, a nice poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so mkuch KL. Yep, lemon drops are good.
I like this, it's clear and well constructed. the feel of it makes me smile and feel good. The first line would be better IMO, if it was "Frozen in layers of lemon frosting'.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

I'm sure there is. But I'm just providing you with honest feedback. The images conjured by the line .. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

...do you get the feeling that someone hasn't gotten laid in a while, just saying ;-)
Mark

10 Years Ago

It's been a very long while. I'm not being cranky though, just honest.
Concise yet sweet and awesome. Your muse always feed your mind to create something like this.
Nice one, Jack. Keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Dhaye. I love having your smile on my page.
This is wonderful. Short, but right to the point.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Coll for your kindness
It feels quite refreshing to read once more one of your wonderful poems. It's short, yet sweet and captivating. Excellently done, dear friend. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


LadySoDivine

10 Years Ago

I have been well. Facing certain problems, so I've been away. Been away from my home as well, foolis.. read more
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Good luck my friend. life is a journey...many ups and downs...but it does level out eventually.
LadySoDivine

10 Years Ago

That I believe. :) That is why we must keep fighting, because everything happens for a reason. Thank.. read more
Dancing to dreams - and intriguing sentence!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Thomas.
Awww such a sweet love poem my dear Jack.Your words make me smile :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
This poem works great when you read it out loud. Good one Jack.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so very much my friend.
"Pausing a moment to glance your direction
Writing this poem while thinking of you"

As usual, you did a splendid job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Shaquana.

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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