Need you tonight

 

 

Your beauty my passion

Your love is my light

Your kiss my desire

I need you tonight

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

Short and very to-the-point, my friend! Nice rhythm for a song

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my sweet friend. Just some little thoughts that pop into my head.

[Emerald Seas]

I understand :) .....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice and had me humming INXS.....

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Jacob. I heard the same thing

[Frieda P]

Oh these short, passionate ones cut right to the chase Jack, blowing my skirt up in a big way...huge sigh. Luverly.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Frieda. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.

[Wuji]

Only in a lonely cosmos would beauty still impact us in such a primal way.

Very poignant, especially the matching of the photo with the 2nd line.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much for your kind words. I actually wrote the poem first then found what I thought was a suitable photo. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my little poem.

[s y e]

Ahhhh, Jackomantic -- this is exquisite. I always knew your pen had never left you. :) I told ya so. Reminded me of the song by Lady Antebellum 'Need You Now'

My favourite.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my wonderful friend.

[kublakhan27]

This certainly cuts to the heart of the matter my friend...well-said and well-written.

[Jack...]

Thanks Steve. Just a little love poem I wrote this afternoon. I appreciate you my friend.