Need you tonight

 

 

Your beauty my passion

Your love is my light

Your kiss my desire

I need you tonight

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

I am mostly a fiction writer and admire your ability to say so much in four lines. It would have taken me so much longer to express the very same emotion.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kindness.

[Cryingkate]

Only one thing could add to this poem.

That Is : If she would only reply with four little words...
" Your place or Mine"
But I'm afraid that won't happen today Jack
Nope.. She's got the case of "Rainbows"
And what she needs is against the wall....

So.. Nope, Not today..........

[Jack...]

Thanks Connie. I don't quite understand, but I still like it.

[Jack...]

I get it now.... :)

[Cryingkate]

LMAO...... I didn't think you saw what she did, but I knew you would LMAO No wonder you adore her so much.

[Cid]

Lol! Your, I think, totally Mad at love! Even since a day I joined the site, am reading such kinda pieces. Whao! What a new age writers! This poem's sweet, simple and a bit sluty. I've figured out even am still figuring out that today's folks love reading, writing, listening n hearing such kinda love words that make their days as you make my day...n they don't care of love even though they know that they'll get hurt by love someday but no! they never learn the lesson ..they always go after the love making the love and of course falling into the world of pain but love's really beautiful cus, the few even only one moment's enough to make love to live the whole life with love then whether love brings tears or not, gives pain or not.

[Jack...]

Thanks for stopping by today. I appreciate your visit.

[Lilac]

Soft and sweet, making your point quite clearly

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Lilac. I appreciate your visit and kind words this afternoon.

[Lilac]

You're welcome :)

[Marie]

Very simple and sweet...you don't need long poems to get your pont across.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Marie.

[Rainbow-Ribbons]

BEAUTIFUL!!! Like a sweet song this poem soft and lyrical so well expressing the wonder of love!!!!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. Just a little one I penned out. I appreciate you stopping by.

[Cassie]

this one will make whoever it is addressed to avail themselves immediately. Very nicely done

[Jack...]

Good morning Sunshine. Thanks so much for stopping by and saying such nice things to me.

[Pryde Foltz]

Short and ever-so-sweet. Wonderful moment you have written.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my sweet friend.

[Brittany Zedalis]

So much love in so few words. Awesome!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Brittany.

[Carolann Dowsett]

So simple yet so beautiful and full of passion.

[Jack...]

Hey Carolann. Thanks so very much. It is so nice to see you again.