You are my life

You are my life

A Poem by Jack...

 

 

 

 

You are my life

 

 

Simple reminders of conscious belief

Filter my mind with the moon’s silver glow

Satisfied truths sent to spell my relief

All that my beating heart now needs to know

 

Sensual visions to capture the feel

Bringing the contours of wind sculpted plains

Temptations cry out for all that is real

Filling the void that I now can explain

 

Cloudless these night skies of star sprinkled mist

Shimmering soft on the eclipse of love

Delicious the thoughts of your warm tender kiss

Found in these endless illusions above

 

Memories harbor the times that we’ve lived

Photograph remnants of places once shared

Telling the story of all it can give

Building the dreams now worth capturing there

 

Still we are standing alone on this eve

Counting the points of the bright scattered light

Dreams can come true if we only believe

Whispering prayers on this cool winter’s night

 

Hear my desires a float on the breeze

Finding their way to the one I adore

Listen, my love, for I hope but to please

Biding the time till you’re with me once more

 

Down on my knees with my fingers entwined

Solemn requests I now send to the sky

Pleading with heaven to be ever kind

Answer my prayers 'fore this night passes by

 

All that I ask shall be all that I need

Merely the chance I may prove ever true

You are my life and in that I believe

Forever my love shall be only for you

 

 

 

© 2014 Jack...


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Jack...
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Very nice work Jack. Sometimes I wish I could feel that need again, but... I'm much more centered without it. Hopefully love comes to those of us who deserve it and want it. I wish the best for you my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Mark. I haven't found the center yet...these damn tootsie pops take forever. :)
Mark

10 Years Ago

heh, Love as a tootsie pop... maybe take a cue from the owl and bite!!!
Jack...

10 Years Ago

That is the fastest way to get to the chocolatey chewy center...that's for sure.
Amazing Jack you have the heart of a true romantic and express words of love with such pure passion and longing. A joy to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Carolann. I appreciate your kind words to me.
This is absolutely lovely.
"Hear my desires a float on the breeze
Finding their way to the one I adore
Listen, my love, for I hope but to please
Biding the time till you’re with me once more"

Great job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Shaquana. Love the photo.
Now this is how you tell someone you love them. Great job! ^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Brittany, this smile I am wearing right now is because of you. Thank you so very much for your kind .. read more
Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

You're very much welcome :)
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Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I appreciate your visit today.
Who ever she is...she is one lucky woman. Your words of love..even natural wants and needs turn into such a mastery of devotion. Another magical write my friend...xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Lily Mae, always when your smile finds my page it ignites a joy within me. Thank you so very much f.. read more
This is lovely Jack. I prefer this more than hearing 'I love you'

Definitely my Jackomantic... always.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend, but at times hearing someone say "I love you" is divine
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Even better then I love you is to hear you are someones life. This was smooth and flowing...soft as babys breath. Very lovely...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you found this one and you enjoyed it. I truly appreciate .. read more

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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