Fool Senryu

Fool Senryu

A Poem by Jack...

 

 

What fool on the hill?

If you look close you will see

I stand on flat ground

© 2014 Jack...


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Jack...
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So you do Jack, so you do...I was going to say pfft and pssh, but you're much too clever my so NOT foolish friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Frieda, my sweet poetic friend, we can all be fools at times and I can be the biggest, but I do try .. read more
hahahaha.....very nice, you fear heights that much

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Amongst other things. Thank you Cassie.
Sometimes it is just good sense to keep your feet flat on the ground.Well penned Jack.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
so clever...i hate heights, but alas, that makes me a fool on flat ground too.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

At least I am not alone. Thank you Jacob
Now, this reminded me of the fools in the royal's court.
I'd rather listen to the story of their juggling skills,
than be fooled by the fancy mouth walks of the wise on the king's table..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Belle
"Christopher Columbus" related Jack? :D 1492?
Anyhow, that is what you made me think off...
Fool or not, I think nobody is a fool, but us....
To think of the foolish fact we are fools...
We should just love, trust, and have more knowledge...

Then that flat ground is so whole again.

- Elisa



Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Elisa
ahhh … yes took a bit for that one to SINK in. Very clever, Jack.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde

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San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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