Fool Senryu

 

 

What fool on the hill?

If you look close you will see

I stand on flat ground

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

So I guess you're nobodys' fool.
good write.

[zephyr]

It is all about perspective. Cool senyru.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much.

[Marie]

There is no fool on the hill after all then...

[Jack...]

Nope, I'm standing right here in the parking lot. Thanks Marie.

[SyberRose]

Loved the senyru and the image Jack...nicely done as always...Rose:)

[Jack...]

Thank you Rose.

[Kellyrose]

A wonderful write that brings a smile

[Jack...]

Thanks Kelly

[Emerald Seas]

Each of us has our moments, Jack! Lol... I don't think you're a fool at all. I definitely have had my foolish moments, but overall a fool? No... (Well, I could have an internal argument over that, but let's let that slide) haha
You, my friend, have a heart - that is never foolish. :)

[Jack...]

Funny, they always say, if it looks like a fool, walks like a fool, it definitely ain't no damn duck.

Let me borrow another from the Fab Four...The biggest fool to ever hit the big time and all I had to do was act naturally...that's me.

[Emerald Seas]

Shush!
Everything in life is a gamble... People are often labeled the fool for putting all their cards on the table. However, could wind up nothing... or it could be a royal flush (or whatever hand wins the game - I don't know poker!)... But I hope you get my point. I'd rather be the fool, than be left wondering... However, sometimes you play your hand AND still wondering. Lol... But I digress ;-)

[Jack...]

Damn, all I have are a pair of 3's

[Emerald Seas]

Lol... what just popped into my head when I read that!
Ménage a trios - sometimes that's NOT a bad hand ;) not that I'd know, but.... sounds good!

[Jack...]

Nothing like a full house.

[Emerald Seas]

Bwahahaha ;-)
Jeez... Didn't think of that!

[NeiL ArandA]

Intriguingly nice Senryu. Its makes me wonder what inspiration to what it is drawn. It reminds me of a song by my favorite band The Beatles -
"The Fool On The Hill"

Day after day, alone on the hill
The man with the foolish grin
is keeping perfectly still
But nobody wants to know him
They can see that he's just a fool
As he never gives an answer
But the fool on the hill
Sees the sun going down
And the eyes in his head
See the world spinning around

Well on the way, head in a cloud
The man of a thousand voices
talking percetly loud
But nobody ever hears him
Or the sound he appears to make
And he never seems to notice
But the fool on the hill
Sees the sun going down
And the eyes in his head
See the world spinning around

[joshua sky]

Your poem here is like a mirror for me. I look into it, and am reminded of not so much my flaws, but rather the fact that I cannot slumber in the honing of my character...

Thank you for your beautiful works my friend. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Joshua. Your kindness makes it all worthwhile

[Kylie]

I know a fool all to well when I see one and you Jack, are not a fool.

[Jack...]

Thanks Kylie, but pictures don't lie. Look at mine(at least its me)...that's a fool my friend.

[Kylie]

What's a fool. if it's you then how are you fooling someone?

[s y e]

This is not you Jack, I know secretly you write this for me. I am the biggest, stupidest kinda fool anyone could know...

You're not foolish Jack. Not in the least.

[Jack...]

Noodle my friend, if only you knew. Thank you so much for your kind words.

[s y e]

Yeah, well, I guess I don't. No worries.