Fade to blue

 

 

 

 

Fade to blue

 

Fade to blue

In starlight drippings

The full moon sings

Hypnotic song

When turquoise tints

Horizon dreaming

Can sunrise wait

For very long

~~~

In lines of gold

And amber teasings

Of Jasmine breeze

Your scent does find

My heartbeat swirl

At last believing

I breathe a sigh

That you are mine

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Cid]

Lol! You compared here the beauty of nature with the beauty of your love. Lovely comparison! Mostly, the lovers find out even grab such kinda photons of lights through the eyes of love.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much.

[NeiL ArandA]

Splendid write Jack . A song lyric came to my mind upon reading your piece.
" Summer breeze makes me feel fine . Blowing through the Jasmine of my mind "

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Neil.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Brilliant as always with a mesmerizing touch of awe, beauty,comfort, and breathtaking wonder. Spectacular job!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wow, you are truly a talented wordsmith... so many amazing lines here, well done!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Travis for your kindness.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Starting with one color and creating many for the eyes of the viewer.
NATURE creates beauty that we all need in our lives and you have captured it here.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Julie. Indeed, we all need a little color in our world.

[m.s.early]

Our author captivates us with another compelling sunrise. Such an anthology that after combining this poem with some of his others I marvel at how such a predictable occurrence can be a mystery every time. What a blessed gift is offered at the start of every day.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Xavier...sunrise...one of my favorite times of day.

[MsJewel]

The images you have created are gorgeous Jack...so soft and romantic. The perfect love poem!

:) Julie

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Julie

[Jack...]

So utterly beautiful Jack, I wonder if it was a sunrise, or a sunset.... anyhow it could be both, your words, are a painting on a skyish (don't know if that word exists, but made it right up, out of heart...) maybe it's NetherEnglish ;) canvas, your unique canvas. Music to the ears, and love of the heart. Beautiful my dear friend....

- Elisa

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Elisa. Please feel free to create whatever words you like when reviewing my poetry, just the fact that you stopped by has thrilled me.

Awww, I will. I do like to create (new) words. Some call it a habbit of me. You're so very welcome Jack, it's my pleasure.

[Pryde Foltz]

In lines of gold
And amber teasings
Of Jasmine breeze
Your scent does find
My heartbeat swirl
At last believing
I breathe a sigh
That you are mine

A gorgeous piece , my friend.

[Jack...]

Pryde, I am always excited to see you on my page. Thank you so very much.

[Shaun Payton]

Breathing this in, its a meditative beauty to touch the soul and appreciate beauty all around.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Shaun for your kindness. I am pleased you found this to your liking

[Shaun Payton]

Im kind to wonderful poetry Jack:) You are welcome!:)