Here with me

For the 10th of the month and every other day forevermore...

 

Here with me

 

From these eyes, these tears you find

Whisper you are on my mind

Held within my memory

So always you are here with me

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

From these eyes, these tears you find
Whisper you are on my mind
Held within my memory
So always you are here with me

These memories should be cherished. Lovely Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you Pryde.

[Cassie]

I am also wondering just like Diana, good one as usual my friend

[Jack...]

Thank you Sunshine...the 10th is a sad day for a friend who lost someone she loved...this was for her.

[Diana]

I'm wondering about the significance of the 10th now. A lovely piece, short and heart-felt...

[Jack...]

Thank you Diana...the 10th is a sad day for a friend of mine. She lost someone she loved on the 10th, this was written for her.

[MsJewel]

Short, sweet and stunning!

:) Julie

[Jack...]

Thank you Julie

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A delightful, short read, that though simple, is profound with unearthly emotion. A great write!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Gleb.

[Sami Khalil]

I don't know the significance of the 10th but I feel this outstanding poem is sad to the bones...:).........

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami. This was written for Frieda. The 10th is a significant day in her life. I appreciate you stopping by my friend

[Sami Khalil]

I see...You are welcome...:)...................

[Will Neill]

Jack, four powerful lines that say it all. Nice work.
Will

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Will for stopping by today

[m.s.early]

Heartache... a poet's bitter friend

[Jack...]

Thank you Xavier.

[Kimmie]

Perfection, sad though....

[Jack...]

Thank you Kimmie.

[Marie]

Lovely and sad...image of a memory...

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Marie.