Said the shadow to the tree

 

 

Said the shadow to the tree,

 

“You know my friend, life is not always fair

Take this vine of fingered grip

Tentacles of timid meaning

Holding you close as to not let go

Filling each bark split void

Offering a feeling of need and want

 

Given time it will engulf

Block the sun light

Tighten in mass fury

Wrap itself of everything you stand for

Then when strength is gone

And you topple to the ground

This vine will happily move on

To the next tree

While you rot

Returning to the earth,

which once gave you life”

 

The tree replied,

 

“But it feels so good to be wanted”

 

The sun set and the shadow was silent

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Bluefire]

The tree wanted to be loved and would risk damnation for it, much like human beings often do.
What a beautiful metaphor, and wicked lovely way of writing.
Well done! ^^

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Bluefire]

No problem!. ^^

[Linda alexander]

A very deep message, a naked truth, how clearly and simplified way you could convey, simplicity and authenticity, human nature combo, really enjoyed

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Linda. Sometimes it feels this way.

[Linda alexander]

It balances the flora, and you have the better role, not sure which role I have in this flora, may be a shrub lst all leaves after storm, we need all, proud of all

[Cody Williams]

Great job on this Jack! I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Cody

[Brittany Zedalis]

The imagery is wonderful, and the words are deep. Great job.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Brittany. I really appreciate you.

[LadySoDivine]

This is incredible, Jack! I love the metaphor! How we desperately cling on to something that is not good for us and will not be there for long simply because we're lonely and wish to feel wanted. We've all been there at some point in our lives. And we've all ignored the warnings of the ones closest to us. Exquisite poem, well done!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend. Perhaps a small lesson in there that might help on your journey.

[LadySoDivine]

Yes, I believe so as well. No, thank YOU for posting this, Jack, I learn something new from you each day. :)

[A]

Incredible poem!!!! I love it so much! And the end is breath taking... Bravo! (in my favorites)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Anabela...I appreciate your kindness.

[A]

You are welcome!

[s y e]

Life is never fair Jack... I've learnt that for sure. This is a lovely conversation. A beautiful read.

[Jack...]

Thank so much Noodle. It may not be fair, but as long as it evens out in the end, all is good.

[s y e]

And what if it doesn't? What if you're stuck in this unfair life? :-(

[Jack...]

Noodle, you have much more life to live than I do. You will see, your life will be beautiful. You are a beautiful young girl and you will find someone who makes your heart sing. And when you do, I want you to let me know so I can say "I told you so". These years right now are rough my friend, but they will get better, I promise. Listen to me, I know what I am talking about. Someday you will look back and say, that Jack knew what he was talking about.

[s y e]

I'll definitely tell you because for one, I don't wanna lose contact you and stop talking to you. Secondly, I know you'll love saying "I told you so." ;)>

[Cassie]

Nice conversation, yes life is not always fair. I enjoyed reading

[Jack...]

Thank you for your smile Sunshine.

[Talesha]

Immediately I thought,the eyes of a writer are truly beautiful.I love your imagery and intricate details describing the tree.Thank you for sharing.

Best wishes,
TM

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Talesha

[Rita L. Sev]

Ooh! I love this wonderfully imaged tale, Jack. Wise indeed to love one's purpose, even when naysayers have their say.

[Jack...]

Right you are my friend. Thanks so much.