Love shall keep us warm

Love shall keep us warm

A Poem by Jack...
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For all of my friends in the North East U.S.

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Love shall keep us warm

 

Clouded scarves of winter skies

Woolen wings on tempered sighs

Nature wears her white disguise

Mounting on the field

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Laced along the bitter cold

Futures that have been foretold

Endless phrases painted bold

And our lips are sealed

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Frozen links of glistened feel

Piled deep as to conceal

Left alone in what is real

Bracing for the storm

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Though inside a fire roars

With the one that I adore

Let it snow forever more

Love shall keep us warm

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© 2014 Jack...


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Jack...
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Beautiful representation and expression from the effortless grace of your verse, to its placement on the page and the picture. Great offering today.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Pryde. I hope you are staying warm.
i love this poem! you conjure up the white landscape in all its glory with your words and your ending twist is adorable. When you're inside with the one you love before a fire, the cold and snowy weather only serves to accentuate the feeling warmth. Stay snug! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend. Thinking of my friends in the northen part of the U.S. today...no .. read more
Just what I needed on this snow filled day. Quite cold and windy here, so your luverly poetry is like a warm hug on the page to read today. It's a stunner and a keeper Jack.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Frieda, my sweet friend, thrilled this one may have provided you a little warmth on this cold day in.. read more
A beautiful poem Jack. I love the form - it is much like the Zejel, which is one of my favorites. Your rhyme is so wonderful and not forced which makes the poem flow beautifully. Love it!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Julie. I am happy you enjoyed this.
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This is such an awesome poem. Just the first stanza alone is amazing to take in. I love poems about winter and this is worthy of being one of the best. Excellent job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. That is a wonderful compliment
A very charming, flowing rhyming verse Jack.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much John.
I am sitting among the remanents of a blizzard. It can be very cozy and comforting when you are warm. Hope it's sunny and 70 where you are today. ; )

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Not quite Anne, but close. Thank you so much. I see winter has found you again and I hope it is you .. read more

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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