Love shall keep us warm

For all of my friends in the North East U.S.

 

 

Love shall keep us warm

 

Clouded scarves of winter skies

Woolen wings on tempered sighs

Nature wears her white disguise

Mounting on the field

T

Laced along the bitter cold

Futures that have been foretold

Endless phrases painted bold

And our lips are sealed

T

Frozen links of glistened feel

Piled deep as to conceal

Left alone in what is real

Bracing for the storm

T

Though inside a fire roars

With the one that I adore

Let it snow forever more

Love shall keep us warm

 T

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

A great message delivered through a beautiful poem

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I love how you have structured this one.
Yes, it was cold here, and it is still cold. However, it is always better with one you love.
It is so nice to keep each other warm when you are in love with each other.
Thanks, Jack for sharing.

[Jack...]

Thank you Josie

[Cassie]

yes, Am gonna shelve this one. Love truly keeps one warm especially at heart if it is genuine love.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sweet Sunshine. I appreciate you tucking this one away and want you to know, it is your beautiful smile that warms up my page.

[s y e]

Jack, you write such beautiful, romantic poems that just make me never want to leave the world I enter into when I read you. It seems like a place where no one needs to worry, stress and everything is just happy, romantic and perfect. Like this write.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. I wish it were like that outside of poetry. Wouldn't it be nice if whatever you wrote, that was the way your day would be?

[s y e]

Amazing right?

[London's Lily]

This is very pretty and descriptive, giving a very clear sense of the winter roaring outside while the fire roars inside. I also like the rhyme scheme. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Lily. It is so nice to see you again.

[London's Lily]

You're welcome! And thank you. I've been away for longer than I expected to be, and now I'm trying to catch up on reading what all of my talented fellow Cafe dwellers have been up to. :)

[Jack...]

Didn't sneak off to London by any chance, did you?

[London's Lily]

Oh dear, if only! ;)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching piece that really makes me want to hug you close, well done.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Thomas.

[SyberRose]

Clouded scarves of winter skies
Woolen wings on tempered sighs
Nature wears her white disguise
Mounting on the field



I really like this cozy little poem...we got a little snow but the rain washed it away today...
Nicely done Jack as always...Rose:)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much sweet Rose for your kind words

[Kimmie]

This is beautiful. Your words and so warm and caring. I think you're more of a romantic guy who likes to sweep us ladies off our feet, huh? (-; Ha, only kidding but you are quite the romantic.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Kimmie. I have been told that but I don't mind hearing it again. I appreciate your kind words.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Fantastic write! Love truly shall keep every one warm, and your finely crafted words will keep my own heart warm forever. Beautiful!

[Jack...]

Thank you Gleb, happy you enjoyed this.

[kublakhan27]

There is warmth in these very words. This piece reminds me of why I hold such an affinity for the Winter...it's the only season that brings out these feelings in us. Incredible command with regards to the form as well. Great work my friend.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.