I wish I were a rain cloud

 

 

 

 

I wish I were a rain cloud

for I would float to you

Settle in a perfect place

with a wondrous view

~

I would stay there waiting

in the sky above

And every morning you arose

I’d rain on you my love

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

This is so touching and extra ordinary :)
Simply amazing write Jack :)

- Singh :)
Cheers!

[Jack...]

Thanks my friend, happy this one rained on you.

[Vikrantsingh]

Indeed! this one did :)

[Cassie]

awwwww.......this one too is beautifully done.

[Jack...]

Thank you for raining your smile on me today Sunshine.

[Kimmie]

I adore the rain so you can come over to me any day Jack. Ha. You're the sweetest. A lovely, cute offering.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

A light and sweet offering, Jack - :)

[Jack...]

Thank you Rita. Happy you liked this.

[Lydia Shutter]

There is an enchanting innocence to this one, Jack....like something a child might write in a Valentine. Sweet romance....absolutely charming. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Thanks Lydi...the child like fits me to a tee. :)

[Marie]

That's very sweet...a rain of hearts...

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend.

[s y e]

This is actually so cute, you're definitely my Jackomantic, this is beautifully written my friend. You're just too kind and caring for your own good! :-))

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. See, dark clouds can have that silver lining

[s y e]

Not always but most of the time. :-))

[Frieda P]

Awh this is so freaking adorable Jack...might be raining, but it's a huge smile on the page. :-)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my sweet friend. Just another of my hallmark moments. :)

[Laura Harrison]

This is so beautiful and loving, such a enjoyable read :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.